Comment from Sandra Ludwick

Excellent

Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. I enjoyed reading it. You portrayed what must have been a very hurtful experience. Good luck.

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019

Thanks for the review. Not my experience to be sure. Nice to have a protective brother though. Cheers.

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

I think most brothers would want to kill the punk who blackened his sister's eye. Ahd this one even has a guest bed for her. At least she has the right brother.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019

Yes, everyone needs a safe place.
If that was my boyfriend, HE would have been looking for the safe spot to heal ha ha, cheers. Thanks for the review.

Comment from Darlene Franklin

Excellent

How w onderf ul that she has her b rother as her c hampion, and a place to escae to. let's hope she stays put and doesn't go back to the scoundrel. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019

Thanks for the review. Not all heroes wear capes, nice to have someone to stand up for the ones suffering, cheers.