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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your posts always make me smile Rhonnie, lots of innocent fun going on here in this write, I love the art work and I liked the integral acrostic too, love Dolly x
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Your posts always make me smile Rhonnie, lots of innocent fun going on here in this write, I love the art work and I liked the integral acrostic too, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Sep-2019
Comment from Sallyo
I just wasted a while trying to see an acrostic in the whole poem (silly me) then I finally realised... nice cheerful one and I have just one suggestion; put some possessive apostrophes in "Gods Garden/ Flowers" etc; otherwise it sounds lie plural gods.
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I just wasted a while trying to see an acrostic in the whole poem (silly me) then I finally realised... nice cheerful one and I have just one suggestion; put some possessive apostrophes in "Gods Garden/ Flowers" etc; otherwise it sounds lie plural gods.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2019