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Comment from country ranch writer
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Some are not cut out to be dads when they find out your pregnant they haul tail and run.His loss not yours he should have been a real man and stepped up to the plate and took responsibility.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
    HELLO COUNTRY RANCH WRITER: I like the way you address this matter. I agree with you 100%. His loss...not yours. Clever girl. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69. P.S...All women should think like you think.
Comment from Sugarray77
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This is a short verse full of emotive and vibrant meanings. The subject of the dead beat dad is one in which there are many participants in our society. Your verse shines the spotlight on theme.

Melissa

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
    HELLO MALISSA: I thank you for your review. You are appreciated. You see this posting exactly like I want my reader to see it. God bless you, Melissa. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Susan X Smith
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This is a humorous poem about a serious subject. It is a short piece, yet it addresses an important topic in only a few words. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes in your ongoing creative writing.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
    HELLO SUSAN: I thank you for your review. You are appreciated. You see what I've written as it should be seen. You are welcome, lady. God bless you. Cordially : rhonnie69.