Colorful Sensations
Experience each and every one of them...29 total reviews
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Your poem is an excellent contest entry and the picture perfectly illustrates it. You should do very well in the voting booth. Good luck. I hope you win.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Your poem is an excellent contest entry and the picture perfectly illustrates it. You should do very well in the voting booth. Good luck. I hope you win.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Thanks much this great review.
Comment from Ogden
A beautiful poem, and definitely a contender for the win! Specifically, it's exceptionally well-written, with wonderful imagery, rhyming, and a beautiful illustration. (I won't wish you good luck, because I'm in the contest, too.)
Don
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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A beautiful poem, and definitely a contender for the win! Specifically, it's exceptionally well-written, with wonderful imagery, rhyming, and a beautiful illustration. (I won't wish you good luck, because I'm in the contest, too.)
Don
Comment Written 27-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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That's alright, Don -- may the best imagery/emotion win!!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and presentation.
-The imagery creates
a vivid word picture
of various autumn scenes,
and the poem flows well, too.
-I like the second line about
"Autumn's gold" and the
repetition of similar phrases
is also very good.
-The concluding verse
is a nice way to wrap up
"nature's gifts."
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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-Very nice image
and presentation.
-The imagery creates
a vivid word picture
of various autumn scenes,
and the poem flows well, too.
-I like the second line about
"Autumn's gold" and the
repetition of similar phrases
is also very good.
-The concluding verse
is a nice way to wrap up
"nature's gifts."
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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Thank you for this wonderful review.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This is a poem that is a joy to read. You have hit the mark in every way. It just flows so well and the words used and the format... perfect. A beautiful picture... Good luck. It could be a winner.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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This is a poem that is a joy to read. You have hit the mark in every way. It just flows so well and the words used and the format... perfect. A beautiful picture... Good luck. It could be a winner.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Thanks much for this great review!!
Comment from judester
This is a vibrant and thought~provoking poem. The reader walks right alongside you as we explore the wonders of autumn. Smooth rhymes and a lovely photo makes this one my favorite, cheers.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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This is a vibrant and thought~provoking poem. The reader walks right alongside you as we explore the wonders of autumn. Smooth rhymes and a lovely photo makes this one my favorite, cheers.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This poem is skillfully-written and delightful. You have vividly described how autumn appeals to all of our senses. Also, you have made excellent use of parallel structure at the beginnings of stanzas, changing verbs to paint the entire picture.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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This poem is skillfully-written and delightful. You have vividly described how autumn appeals to all of our senses. Also, you have made excellent use of parallel structure at the beginnings of stanzas, changing verbs to paint the entire picture.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Thanks much for this great review.
Comment from royowen
I like this superbly written poem, touching it with and associating it with your sense and all those precious things that give meaning and lightness, and except them all as reality, written in articulate rhyming quatrains, abcb rhyming and ballad style, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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I like this superbly written poem, touching it with and associating it with your sense and all those precious things that give meaning and lightness, and except them all as reality, written in articulate rhyming quatrains, abcb rhyming and ballad style, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 26-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Thanks much for your wonderful review!!
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Well done
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the colorful sensation we feel when we walk through a autumn scene with all the color shades of autumn from gold, to orange or brown.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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A very well-written poem about the colorful sensation we feel when we walk through a autumn scene with all the color shades of autumn from gold, to orange or brown.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Thanks much for this great review!!
Comment from June Sargent
You have certainly invited us to immerse ourselves in the sensations of autumn! We can experience the sights, sounds, scents, taste and touch of the season. Too if my list - the scent of hot apple cider and the taste of pumpkin pie!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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You have certainly invited us to immerse ourselves in the sensations of autumn! We can experience the sights, sounds, scents, taste and touch of the season. Too if my list - the scent of hot apple cider and the taste of pumpkin pie!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Thanks much for this great review, June!!
Comment from Gail Denham
A nice look at autumn's delights using the various senses - smell, sight, touch, etc. Nice job. And the image you chose goes so nicely with your poem. I would love to drive through through great patches of these glorious colored trees. Our aspens are finally changing - and then they clap and sing in the wind.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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A nice look at autumn's delights using the various senses - smell, sight, touch, etc. Nice job. And the image you chose goes so nicely with your poem. I would love to drive through through great patches of these glorious colored trees. Our aspens are finally changing - and then they clap and sing in the wind.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Thanks much for this great review, Gail!!
