Childhood Memories
Disney Parks and Universal Studios Parks.27 total reviews
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. You story of visiting the Disney parks fired up some nostalgia as I read. Way back in the 80s my son was young there was Disney World and Epcot Center. I enjoyed the days at the park but all I ever wanted to do was go to Epcot Center. Good luck in the contest. Robert
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Hello mystery writer. You story of visiting the Disney parks fired up some nostalgia as I read. Way back in the 80s my son was young there was Disney World and Epcot Center. I enjoyed the days at the park but all I ever wanted to do was go to Epcot Center. Good luck in the contest. Robert
Comment Written 26-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Thank you! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my essay!
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Comment from Susan X Smith
I've only been to Florida four times - once to Miami and three times to Disney World - and I don't have kids. I can surely relate to your story. It's magical and worth the price. I think I've most of it except Sea World and Harry Potter. I didn't see Alfred Hitchcock but since you mention it, I'll have to go back. Needless to say, I thoroughly enjoyed your story.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2019
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I've only been to Florida four times - once to Miami and three times to Disney World - and I don't have kids. I can surely relate to your story. It's magical and worth the price. I think I've most of it except Sea World and Harry Potter. I didn't see Alfred Hitchcock but since you mention it, I'll have to go back. Needless to say, I thoroughly enjoyed your story.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2019
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Thank you! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my story!
Comment from Alex Rosel
While I can relate to the topic you cover -- as a child I loved theme park rides as well -- I don't think this is focused enough. The remit asks for the favorite time (singular) of your life. You've covered a number of different events. However, that's just a personal opinion; the people voting may well be reminded of their childhood by your words, and warm to your piece.
I went to all rides -- If this was mine, I'd change it to " I went on all rides."
Best of luck with the competition {smiles}.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2019
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While I can relate to the topic you cover -- as a child I loved theme park rides as well -- I don't think this is focused enough. The remit asks for the favorite time (singular) of your life. You've covered a number of different events. However, that's just a personal opinion; the people voting may well be reminded of their childhood by your words, and warm to your piece.
I went to all rides -- If this was mine, I'd change it to " I went on all rides."
Best of luck with the competition {smiles}.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2019
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Thank you! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my essay!
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
They are even more wonderful when you are a grown up LOL. I have been well over 40 times so far :). This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver a complete and entertaining experience within the word count allotted. The content will resonate strongly with any and all who have experienced and truly love the "happiest place on earth". Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2019
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They are even more wonderful when you are a grown up LOL. I have been well over 40 times so far :). This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver a complete and entertaining experience within the word count allotted. The content will resonate strongly with any and all who have experienced and truly love the "happiest place on earth". Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2019
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You're welcome, and Thank you! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my essay!
Comment from Bill Pinder
Thanks for sharing this insight into your experiences at the theme parks. I'm glad you could go with your nephews also. Keep on writing and have a great day1
Bill
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2019
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Thanks for sharing this insight into your experiences at the theme parks. I'm glad you could go with your nephews also. Keep on writing and have a great day1
Bill
Comment Written 25-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2019
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Nice job explaining a favorite time of your life. I had not been to Disneyland for a long, long time. But people have posted videos of the rides online! The ones you mention include Point of View rides. I think there was a word missing in: I have gone the Epcot Center
I think you want to put 'to' in there somewhere.
Nice share.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2019
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Nice job explaining a favorite time of your life. I had not been to Disneyland for a long, long time. But people have posted videos of the rides online! The ones you mention include Point of View rides. I think there was a word missing in: I have gone the Epcot Center
I think you want to put 'to' in there somewhere.
Nice share.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2019
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Thank you! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my essay!
Comment from Nowhereman1
Very vivid descriptions of the happiest place on earth. I live close to Disney and go there a lot and your story brought back a lot of good memories so thank you
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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2019
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Very vivid descriptions of the happiest place on earth. I live close to Disney and go there a lot and your story brought back a lot of good memories so thank you
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Comment Written 25-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2019
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You're welcome, and thank you! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my essay!
