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Love Long Distance

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A Wartime Romance

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Comment from Lu Saluna
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This was a very romantic chapter. With Bill remembering Cathy's birthday and sending roses.

I have seen you use initials for some of their sayings but some of them I don't under stand like this one:
HKAYK
Can you please write it out for me?

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
    Hi Lu! Thank you so much for reading Chapter 12 of Love Long Distance. Yes, we use initials at times. HKAYK means Hugs, Hisses and You Know. :) So happy you are following along. It means a lot to both of us! We have 21 chapter posted so far. Chapter 22 has also just been written and will be posted very soon. Wishing you a wonderful weekend. God Bless.
    Respectfully with Admiration,
    Bill & Cathy
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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sure enjoying your story. Cannot wait until read the next chapter. I like it because the setting is somewhat based in the southern part of Tennessee. Thank you for writing your great story and letting us read it.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
    Hi Rosemary! HURRAH! We really appreciate you reading and reviewing this chapter. Thank you! Also, a BIG THANK YOU for your continue support. Read on to find out what happens next!
    God Bless,
    Bill & Cathy
Comment from Teri7
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This is another very cute and very well written chapter with lots of good dialogue and very good descriptive words. I thought I had reviewed it already, but found out today I had not. Thanks for sharing! love and blessings, teri

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
    Hi Teri! We really appreciate you reading and reviewing this chapter. Thanks so much! Glad you found it well written with good dialogue and descriptive words. Thank you also for the continued support. Chapter 13 is in the works and coming soon. God Bless.
    Respectfully with Admiration,
    Bill & Cathy
Comment from Ulla
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Hi to both of you. An enchanting new chapter to your story that really shows the deep felt love shared between them. It's a joy to read. I just found one thing:
Too tired to drive later, we stay overnight at = Too tired to drive later, we stayed overnight at
All best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 29-Sep-2019
    Hi Ulla! So glad this was a joy for you to read. Thank you so much for your review continued support. Also, thank you for the correction! It has been fixed. We really appreciate the help! Chapter 13 is in the works and coming soon.
    God Bless.
    Respectfully with Admiration,
    BIll & Cathy
Comment from Sallyo
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Nice clean copy (no spag, I mean) and the different fonts help keep me afloat with who's speaking/telling in the different media you're using. I've read some of the earlier part so I'm pretty well up with it.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
    Hello, Sallyo! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing Chapter 12 of Love Long Distance. Glad we were able to keep you afloat with our fonts! Thank you, also, for the continued support. Chapter 13 is in the works and coming soon. Wishing you an awesome weekend!
    God Bless,
    Bill & Cathy
Comment from kleck140
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Lovely writing and makes me think of the time Dick went in the army
and to Korea. You have written it best I am a lone writer and get stuck
as I wish I had a partner to bounce ideas with. You have mastered the plan I am seeking. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
    Hi kleck140! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing Chapter 12 of Love Long Distance. Glad you found it lovely. Thank you, also, for sharing. Chapter 12 is in the works and coming soon. We do feel very fortunate to be writing together. We hope you, too, find a writing partner. Wishing you a wonderful weekend filled with joy and laughter. God Bless!
    Respectfully with Admiration,
    Bill & Cathy
reply by kleck140 on 28-Sep-2019
    You are most welcome!
Comment from Sandra Montanino
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This is lots of fun to read. Romance makes all of us the best we can be. To love and be loved is such a great gift. Nicely written and thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
    Hi Sandra! Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review Chapter 12 of Love Long Distance. We agree with your comments here! So glad you found this a fun read. If you haven't read our previous chapters, we encourage you to, and we hope you continue to follow along. Chapter 13 is in the works and coming soon. Wishing you a wonderful weekend!
    God Bless,
    Bill & Cathy
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
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Another fun chapter, well written and most interesting with all the places Cathy went for her birthday. Very fun. I'm sure you have said, but I can't remember what the HKAYK stands for. =} Rox

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
    Hi Rox! Love your comments - fun, well written, most interesting. Hurrah! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. We're glad you enjoyed it. HKAYK means hugs, kisses and....YOU KNOW! :) Wishing you a wonderful weekend! Chapter 13 is in the works and coming soon.
    God Bless,
    Bill & Cathy
Comment from tfawcus
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... and so the romance continues, with all the yearning and remembering of two united souls torn apart by circumstance. This is indeed a passionate and full-blown story of love.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
    Hi Tony! Yes, the romance continues...Chapter 13 is right around the corner, too. We really appreciate you reading and reviewing this. Also, for your continued support and great comments. Thank You! Wishing you a wonderful weekend!
    God Bless,
    Bill & Cathy
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your story chapter. I enjoyed reading it. I felt like I was right there; but even though I wasn't the story was something I could relate to.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019
    Hi Sandra! We're so glad you enjoyed this chapter. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing it. So awesome that you felt like you were in the story! We really appreciate you sharing that. We hope you will continue to read along. Chapter 13 is in the works and coming soon. Have a wonderful weekend!
    God Bless,
    Bill & Cathy