The Street-smart Bird
double nonet16 total reviews
Comment from Lobber
Hi there,
I like your newly coined phrases of :boring blabbermouth birds: AND :drabby and flashy: - as things meant to be. I like your free form use of words such as :drabby: - wow! I'm sure you've invented a new word.
Your transition from kid to the adult world of neon and noise is effective. How about a 6-pack? - Lobber
Drabby and flashy were meant to be
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Hi there,
I like your newly coined phrases of :boring blabbermouth birds: AND :drabby and flashy: - as things meant to be. I like your free form use of words such as :drabby: - wow! I'm sure you've invented a new word.
Your transition from kid to the adult world of neon and noise is effective. How about a 6-pack? - Lobber
Drabby and flashy were meant to be
Comment Written 15-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019
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Hi! You're nice. Thank ou :)
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Sunni!
Well-crafted Nonet! You handled the form well and in the process creative fine visual and emotive imagery. I posted a double-Nonet last year for a site contest last year; it was disqualified. You may want to contact the CEC to see if a double is acceptable.
Also: use (used) to...
Take care!
diane
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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Hello Sunni!
Well-crafted Nonet! You handled the form well and in the process creative fine visual and emotive imagery. I posted a double-Nonet last year for a site contest last year; it was disqualified. You may want to contact the CEC to see if a double is acceptable.
Also: use (used) to...
Take care!
diane
Comment Written 13-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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Hi! Sometimes, I can babble. They'll let me know. Thank you :)
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Nice double-nonet form, here. I love the photo. I think they have proven birds can see colors, or at least some of them. Maybe that is why they are so happy most of the time. This is a reflective, thoughtful bird, though! I like the intuitive observation that the bird also sat and wondered about life, much as a child or young person would. Nice share.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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Nice double-nonet form, here. I love the photo. I think they have proven birds can see colors, or at least some of them. Maybe that is why they are so happy most of the time. This is a reflective, thoughtful bird, though! I like the intuitive observation that the bird also sat and wondered about life, much as a child or young person would. Nice share.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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Hi Crystie! You're very kind. Thank you :)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful nonet and reverse nonet, Sunni -- love your entire presentation and the image it paints even without the chosen pic! ;) The contest, I believe, is only for the 9-line traditional nonet... :) ;) Thanx for sharing your beautiful vision and good luck! ;) :)
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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A beautiful nonet and reverse nonet, Sunni -- love your entire presentation and the image it paints even without the chosen pic! ;) The contest, I believe, is only for the 9-line traditional nonet... :) ;) Thanx for sharing your beautiful vision and good luck! ;) :)
Comment Written 13-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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Hi! Sometimes, I can babble. They'll let me know if I over-wrote. Thank you :)
Comment from Dutchie
Wow, Alicia this is a wonderful double nonet. I love this subject and the picture is so beautiful!! I love the poem. The world seen by the eyes of a bird and his impressions. Yes the true spectrum is not as color full as expected, but the bird's colors are brilliant and bright anyway. Good luck in the contest, for me it's a winner!! Fia
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Wow, Alicia this is a wonderful double nonet. I love this subject and the picture is so beautiful!! I love the poem. The world seen by the eyes of a bird and his impressions. Yes the true spectrum is not as color full as expected, but the bird's colors are brilliant and bright anyway. Good luck in the contest, for me it's a winner!! Fia
Comment Written 27-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thank you :)
Comment from Joan E.
I want that colorful bird to visit my relatively new birdfeeder! I enjoyed your speaking in the voice of the bird in this double nonet and sharing its observations of the world around it. Best wishes in another contest- Joan
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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I want that colorful bird to visit my relatively new birdfeeder! I enjoyed your speaking in the voice of the bird in this double nonet and sharing its observations of the world around it. Best wishes in another contest- Joan
Comment Written 24-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thank you :)
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Alicia. This is a very nice entry into the contest. Your double nonet is shaped perfectly with great word choices. Image is impressive; a beautiful bird for sure. Best of luck with this fine entry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Hi Alicia. This is a very nice entry into the contest. Your double nonet is shaped perfectly with great word choices. Image is impressive; a beautiful bird for sure. Best of luck with this fine entry. Marilyn
Comment Written 24-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thank you :)
Comment from lyenochka
What a perfectly formatted double nonet. It's like an hour glass which makes me think of time. The poem also reflects on time from the fledgling days of the narrator bird who learns that the world is meant to be a "spectrum of drabby and flashy."
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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What a perfectly formatted double nonet. It's like an hour glass which makes me think of time. The poem also reflects on time from the fledgling days of the narrator bird who learns that the world is meant to be a "spectrum of drabby and flashy."
Comment Written 24-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thank you :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written double nonet in perfect hourglass shape. The colorful bird seems to be street smart. He is not a blabber mouth like his friends but a good thinker.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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A very well-written double nonet in perfect hourglass shape. The colorful bird seems to be street smart. He is not a blabber mouth like his friends but a good thinker.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thank you :)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This double nonet poem speaks diverse, nice, real and natural experience of watching street birds at different point of time since childhood and opens knowledge about them anew every time; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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This double nonet poem speaks diverse, nice, real and natural experience of watching street birds at different point of time since childhood and opens knowledge about them anew every time; well said, well done.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thank you :)
