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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Ahhh...yes. If the mom is willing to step into the role... ;/ :) A wonderful offering for the day, sir -- thanx so much for sharing that smile!! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2019

Comment from Susan X Smith
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I have to laugh because of the lighthearted message in this poem. I feel that the rhyme works here although it is unusual in this particular format. I enjoyed the read. Keep writing.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2019