Aiona's Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 66 "Dock Walk - Whose Hair?"Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.
4 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
That poor seal. Was it a poacher or just some awful person who would do this to a seal. The way the passer-by said it, it seemed he'd seen it a lot and didn't care.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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That poor seal. Was it a poacher or just some awful person who would do this to a seal. The way the passer-by said it, it seemed he'd seen it a lot and didn't care.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 13-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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Thanks, Joan. No it just sheds a lot. Apparently it's a big problem in some marinas. They are basically sea dogs - that shed, just as land dogs do. :)
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Don't mention it
Joan
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine write, Aiona, and I also would jump to the wrong conclusion, I mean, look at it for Pete's sake, looks like the sidewalk out front of a tavern at 2 am!
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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Another fine write, Aiona, and I also would jump to the wrong conclusion, I mean, look at it for Pete's sake, looks like the sidewalk out front of a tavern at 2 am!
Comment Written 24-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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For a drunk cat, you mean? (hairball hangover?) Oo! There's an idea for a poem.... Thanks, Mike!
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Sounds like!
Comment from humpwhistle
hmmm. My first guess is 'this seal didn't shed, he was skinned and shaved.'
Don't know if I'm right, but regardless, not a particularly pleasant sight for a morning stroll.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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hmmm. My first guess is 'this seal didn't shed, he was skinned and shaved.'
Don't know if I'm right, but regardless, not a particularly pleasant sight for a morning stroll.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 24-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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Thanks, Lee! It didn't really smell. I just was really searching for a rhyme, there. I'm still trying to think of a way to change those two lines.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is absolutely HILARIOUS! I can't even imagine getting up, walking out bare footed and stepping on that. I think that I would be fit to be tied! I like this! It gave me a smile. I really like what you've done with this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Great job and well done!
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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This is absolutely HILARIOUS! I can't even imagine getting up, walking out bare footed and stepping on that. I think that I would be fit to be tied! I like this! It gave me a smile. I really like what you've done with this and enjoyed reading this well written work. Great job and well done!
Comment Written 24-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
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Thanks! Yeah, it was pretty darn gross. I had no idea seals could shed that much! My husband thinks it was a baby seal molting his baby fur. There are a lot of baby seals in that marina. No one harms them, so they congregate there. The otters populate that marina too, and they poop everywhere!
