Unrequited
Teen love, a mix of excitement and disappointment.13 total reviews
Comment from Kathleen S.
Ah, the reader is led on a journey of musing and waiting upon hope of love sought for and not returned. Not only can one say this happens in teenage years, but also in adulthood. It's a story that is rather universal. An enjoyable read.
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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2019
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Ah, the reader is led on a journey of musing and waiting upon hope of love sought for and not returned. Not only can one say this happens in teenage years, but also in adulthood. It's a story that is rather universal. An enjoyable read.
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Comment Written 22-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2019
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Thank you so very much for such a lovely review. It is truly appreciated: )
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Cindy Warren
Oh, how sad! I remember being a teenager in love. How it hurt when it didn't last. I wasn't always reliable myself. Teenagers can be a thoughtless lot. I don't imagine that's changed much. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2019
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Oh, how sad! I remember being a teenager in love. How it hurt when it didn't last. I wasn't always reliable myself. Teenagers can be a thoughtless lot. I don't imagine that's changed much. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 22-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for your review and stars...much appreciated : )
Comment from Dihalia
I loved your poem. Its a story. It was sad the ending but great. I liked how you looped it and the words you used. Its description is superb. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2019
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I loved your poem. Its a story. It was sad the ending but great. I liked how you looped it and the words you used. Its description is superb. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2019
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Wow, can?t begin to tell you how delighted I am with your review and the six stars! I have been struggling with writing anything...this was an experiment and I?m so very grateful for your encouraging words. Thank you : )
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You are welcome. You should keep writing for sure! :)
