Comment from Joker S J

Exceptional

Wow! This story is amazing so far! Beautifully written and wonderful imagery. I can really get a feel for the old knight and the scenery surrounding him.

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2020

Thanks for the six! I hope you will stick around and enjoy more of the story. It's all in my portfolio. And it's great to have you as a fan.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a wonderful beginning to an interesting story.
I suspect it will be dragons that emerge from the eggs.
Well told and I look forward to reading more.
Sharon

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020

Thanks. There's a book balloon on the rest of the chapters for anyone who wants to catch up.

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

"Aaron's Dragons"
I like the title and I like This story that you have written.
Rich in Theme and Imagery...
"Aaron's Dragons was a smooth read with no grammar issues.
Happy New Year and good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020

Thanks, Ricky. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Happy New Year to you, too.

Comment from tfawcus

Exceptional

Excellent first chapter. It's great to now have a context for the more recent chapters. Delightful humour. There's an echo of Don Quixote in this old knight, though he's up to much more than merely tilting at windmills!

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2020

Thanks for the six! I bought a book balloon in case anyone wants to catch up on missed chapters.

Comment from Sandra Ludwick

Excellent

Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your story. It was very creative and I enjoyed reading it. Your characters show good development and interaction. Well done.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019

Thanks. I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter.

Comment from David M. Miller

Good

Interesting story you have hear. Is this the first chapter/section? I think it has a good strength of drawing in the reader and giving personality to the knight as he speaks to his horse. Maybe it would be stronger if there were more background on how the knight got here, but I suppose that could be getting flushed out in later/earlier parts of the story.

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 Comment Written 29-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019

Yes, this is the first chapter. I'm nearly done, so I bought a book balloon so the people who came in late could catch up.

Comment from RShipp

Excellent

"The horse picked his way carefully back through the thick growth, mindful of the low branches hanging above his rider's head." a trusty steed indeed!

I love your main character and his conversations with his horse.

I can't wait to see what happens next!

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019

I'm so glad you've enjoyed the first chapter. Hope you have some time to catch up.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Cindy. I loved this. You have a great sense of humor in your descriptions of this aging knight Aaron and his horse, Demon. "He knew it was not because the forest needed guarding, but because the king didn't know what else to do with him." This is so true of older folk. A spot is found somewhere to make them feel they are useful. I like the relationship between horse and rider--touching and considerate. Marilyn

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019

Thanks. I'm so glad you enjoyed the first chapter of my book. I'm planning to post another chapter later today and buy a book balloon for anyone who wants to catch up.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I enjoyed your storytelling about the old knight and his horse. I certainly did not expect them to find dragon eggs! Thanks too for the glowing artwork to complement your prose. Smiles- Joan

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2019

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed my story. Hope you will stick around and see what happens when the eggs start hatching!

reply by Joan E. on 02-Dec-2019

Thanks for the encouragement--I am fascinated! More smiles- Joan

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your chapter, Cindy. There ism good flow and much use of descriptive wording. I could picture all of this in my head as I read. I like he way your described the eggs and the witch's cabin. I will continue reading. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully with Love. Jan

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2019

Thanks for going back and catching up.