The Two of Me
Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "Irrational Control?"Chochee Medina Life and Times
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Comment from humpwhistle
Thank you for the reminder. I never encountered your poetry before, therefore I was unaware of the second poem that lurks within.
An interesting technique.
The caps in the 'first poem' are a bit distracting--unless one is already familiar with the technique. Sorry. I'll bet you hear that all too often.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2019
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Thank you for the reminder. I never encountered your poetry before, therefore I was unaware of the second poem that lurks within.
An interesting technique.
The caps in the 'first poem' are a bit distracting--unless one is already familiar with the technique. Sorry. I'll bet you hear that all too often.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 21-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2019
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Thank you for the times to read and review this poem offering.
Sorry about the unintentional distracting capitalization.
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Not to worry. Your notes explained. L
Comment from kiwigirl2821
I've never read your work before and I find that it is full of thoughtful dialog. I like the format as well. There are a couple of mistakes such as in that sixth couplet there is an i before the Not which I'm not sure should be there. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2019
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I've never read your work before and I find that it is full of thoughtful dialog. I like the format as well. There are a couple of mistakes such as in that sixth couplet there is an i before the Not which I'm not sure should be there. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 21-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2019
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Thank you for the review and compliments.
I had thought I fixed that, I'll go back in and correct it. Bless you for the assistance.