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Comment from Laurel Legion
Your haiku is very pleasant to read with the right syllable count. You've captured what it means to be a child in seventeen syllables. Good job making this.
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Your haiku is very pleasant to read with the right syllable count. You've captured what it means to be a child in seventeen syllables. Good job making this.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2019
Comment from Janetsue
I find the child within me quite active and relating very well to this 5-7-5 posting. I don't know if you did the artwork chosen to connect with your message, but it is delightful.
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I find the child within me quite active and relating very well to this 5-7-5 posting. I don't know if you did the artwork chosen to connect with your message, but it is delightful.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2019
Comment from Darlene Franklin
Interesting that you differentiate between a blue heaven (which sounds a little sad like a song lyric) and a blue sky . . . which lifts the spirits again--where she can fly.
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Interesting that you differentiate between a blue heaven (which sounds a little sad like a song lyric) and a blue sky . . . which lifts the spirits again--where she can fly.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2019
