Teddy and Me
Best friends12 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Love this poem. There is something about teddy bears that make life a bit more peaceful and full of love. They comfort a child in need and also bring joy to many children.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Love this poem. There is something about teddy bears that make life a bit more peaceful and full of love. They comfort a child in need and also bring joy to many children.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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This was going back there in my portfolio, dear Rosemary. I'm glad you enjoyed my Nonet.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from Loren .
Sally, I envy your perseverance and of course your talent in writing these. I'm so far behind in my reading and reviews. Will try to get to you new chapter later today. As to this nonet. Yes, even to this guy, it brings back sweet, comforting memories. Loren
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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Sally, I envy your perseverance and of course your talent in writing these. I'm so far behind in my reading and reviews. Will try to get to you new chapter later today. As to this nonet. Yes, even to this guy, it brings back sweet, comforting memories. Loren
Comment Written 22-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind comments, Loren. I?m in glad you enjoyed my contest entry and childlike poem. I continue to hope that you will be motivated to enjoy the Nonet more as your schedule lightens. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :+)
Comment from WryWriter
I count 9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1 syllable count as per writing prompt entry requirement. Nonet. What precious artwork to go with this fabulous theme! A child's best friend...so close to their hearts. The one who understands. I especially liked the third and fourth line. Great job!
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2019
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I count 9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1 syllable count as per writing prompt entry requirement. Nonet. What precious artwork to go with this fabulous theme! A child's best friend...so close to their hearts. The one who understands. I especially liked the third and fourth line. Great job!
Comment Written 22-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2019
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Thank you, Wry Writer! The generous six stars are so appreciated.
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Mystery Author,
Isn't it special how kids love their teddy bears and other stuffed animals? Our granddaughter has them all around her bed... Teddy bears, Big Bird, Minnie Mouse, a giraffe, Patchy-Patch, a turkey, the Lion King, Batman, Elsa, Cookie Monster, Elmo, a wise owl, Toopy & Binoo, etc. You get the idea. She doesn't go to bed alone. She's got all her pals around her pillow.
I count the correct number of syllables/line, and you have great flow from start to finish.
Good Luck!
Cheers,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2019
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Hi Mystery Author,
Isn't it special how kids love their teddy bears and other stuffed animals? Our granddaughter has them all around her bed... Teddy bears, Big Bird, Minnie Mouse, a giraffe, Patchy-Patch, a turkey, the Lion King, Batman, Elsa, Cookie Monster, Elmo, a wise owl, Toopy & Binoo, etc. You get the idea. She doesn't go to bed alone. She's got all her pals around her pillow.
I count the correct number of syllables/line, and you have great flow from start to finish.
Good Luck!
Cheers,
Kimbob
Comment Written 21-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2019
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Thank you Kimbob! How kind you are.
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You came second, Sally! Congratulations! I loved your poem.
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Thank you, dear. I appreciate the kind review and sincere congratulations. Sal xo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sweet children's write filled with that comforting bedtime story feel, I enjoyed your words and wish you luck with the contest, you fulfilled the brief here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2019
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This is a sweet children's write filled with that comforting bedtime story feel, I enjoyed your words and wish you luck with the contest, you fulfilled the brief here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Vera Yan
This poem has an element to it that makes the reader smile- it reminds us of childhood (or early childhood in my case). The addition of the word "bestest" also displays the light spirit and happiness reflected in the poem. Also, there are rhymes (even though there are only nine lines), and even those click together to stimulate the joy of the infant in us.
I'd love to know a more about what inspired you to write this!
-Best of luck in the contest :)
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2019
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This poem has an element to it that makes the reader smile- it reminds us of childhood (or early childhood in my case). The addition of the word "bestest" also displays the light spirit and happiness reflected in the poem. Also, there are rhymes (even though there are only nine lines), and even those click together to stimulate the joy of the infant in us.
I'd love to know a more about what inspired you to write this!
-Best of luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 21-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much for your kind review.
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is such a beautiful poem! And the picture is priceless! I'm a real softie for poems like this that are tender-hearted. I put a poetry book together and the name of it is Tender Touches from My Heart. Anyway, I love the poem! And we've all used bestest when my kids were little and I use Grammarly ALL the time!
God bless!
Patty
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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This is such a beautiful poem! And the picture is priceless! I'm a real softie for poems like this that are tender-hearted. I put a poetry book together and the name of it is Tender Touches from My Heart. Anyway, I love the poem! And we've all used bestest when my kids were little and I use Grammarly ALL the time!
God bless!
Patty
Comment Written 20-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome!
Comment from Susan X Smith
This poem is simple, yet sweet. You did an excellent job with the Nonet format as prescribed in the contest rules. The picture you chose highlights the sweet childlike story.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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This poem is simple, yet sweet. You did an excellent job with the Nonet format as prescribed in the contest rules. The picture you chose highlights the sweet childlike story.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Mystery Writer. Well done Nonet and I like the content of the poem. It's a great picture with a story of a boy and his Teddy. Good luck in the contest. Robert
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Hello Mystery Writer. Well done Nonet and I like the content of the poem. It's a great picture with a story of a boy and his Teddy. Good luck in the contest. Robert
Comment Written 20-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much.
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You're welcome.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This teddy is not only lovable, friend, but he is more than that, a source of joy and happiness, a companion like a real playmate, he is best of the best; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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This teddy is not only lovable, friend, but he is more than that, a source of joy and happiness, a companion like a real playmate, he is best of the best; well said, well done.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
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Thank you for the kind review.
