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Comment from LisaMay
... and that is the wonderful thing about daydreams: we can make everything better. The pet that passed away has now been healed by the vet... you have worked your magic in a poem.
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... and that is the wonderful thing about daydreams: we can make everything better. The pet that passed away has now been healed by the vet... you have worked your magic in a poem.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
You deliver a well penned 5-7-5 with a correct line and syllable count. The content is a well plied public service message since when our furry friends are acting off - we should take them for professional care because you just never know how serious it could be. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
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You deliver a well penned 5-7-5 with a correct line and syllable count. The content is a well plied public service message since when our furry friends are acting off - we should take them for professional care because you just never know how serious it could be. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
Comment from robyn corum
Rhonnie,
Losing a favorite, treasured, beloved family pet is one of the worst experiences we have to go through in this world, I think. This was a happier version than the real thing. Thanks!
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Rhonnie,
Losing a favorite, treasured, beloved family pet is one of the worst experiences we have to go through in this world, I think. This was a happier version than the real thing. Thanks!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
Comment from Y. M. Roger
It also looks like my son's cat... :) And what a cute offering...could be a great reassurance to anyone that has to take their 'friend' for something other than their yearly shots...;) Thanx for sharing your daydream...I hope it makes your friend smile! ;) Yvette
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It also looks like my son's cat... :) And what a cute offering...could be a great reassurance to anyone that has to take their 'friend' for something other than their yearly shots...;) Thanx for sharing your daydream...I hope it makes your friend smile! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019