Abracadabra!
An 'Acrostic Poetry' Contest Offering23 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a very well-written, entertaining acrostic poem. The rhyming and meter are effective touches. I like the clever turn the poem takes--cautioning what will happen to the not-so-nice! :-)
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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This is a very well-written, entertaining acrostic poem. The rhyming and meter are effective touches. I like the clever turn the poem takes--cautioning what will happen to the not-so-nice! :-)
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Thank you for the lovely review, Janice -- Watch out for those fairies...temperamental lil' ones, they are!!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this. It's a type of reading and movies that I've enjoyed for quite some time. They would do harm or good with those pesky wands, depending on there moods. I enjoyed reading this well written fantasy work you've presented here. Well done!
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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I like this. It's a type of reading and movies that I've enjoyed for quite some time. They would do harm or good with those pesky wands, depending on there moods. I enjoyed reading this well written fantasy work you've presented here. Well done!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Watch out for those fairies...temperamental lil' ones, they are!! Thank you for dropping by!
Comment from Bill Pinder
Excellent excellent entry for the acrostic contest! I would give you six stars if I had it for your creativity. I'm guessing I know who wrote this gem. Good luck in the contest!
Bill
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Excellent excellent entry for the acrostic contest! I would give you six stars if I had it for your creativity. I'm guessing I know who wrote this gem. Good luck in the contest!
Bill
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Thanks so much, Bill, for the awesome review -- I'll take the virtual, sir -- means alot!!
Comment from Michele Harber
I love this! I think you did a brilliant job of telling a story using, but not hampered by, the Acrostic format. The story completely fit the word chosen, and bringing it back to that word in the last line, in the way that you did, was ingenious. That you did all that and still made it rhyme just adds to the impressiveness. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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I love this! I think you did a brilliant job of telling a story using, but not hampered by, the Acrostic format. The story completely fit the word chosen, and bringing it back to that word in the last line, in the way that you did, was ingenious. That you did all that and still made it rhyme just adds to the impressiveness. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Sooooo, this was such a welcome smile to come home to -- thank you so very much for your awesome comments and those bright stars!! You have made my day....and that's really not an exaggeration -- would've liked to have used the 'Abracadabra!" a number of times throughout the course of the day - ha!! Thank you again and have a great evening!!!
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You absolutely deserve the praise and the stars, and I'm glad I was able to make your day. Your poem has been leading the competition from the start, and deservedly so - and this is from someone entered in the contest!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written acrostic poem about the magic we knew as children where the magician says abracadabra and things disappear or appear and we could not understand how they got it done.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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A very well-written acrostic poem about the magic we knew as children where the magician says abracadabra and things disappear or appear and we could not understand how they got it done.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Thank you for the review today!!
Comment from Aiona
Oh so cute! I love this acrostic. Very smooth and clever use of the acrostic letters. I think that's the way it's supposed to be, right? You're not supposed to really notice that it is an acrostic. It's just a clever rhyming poem that evokes imagery of magic!
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Oh so cute! I love this acrostic. Very smooth and clever use of the acrostic letters. I think that's the way it's supposed to be, right? You're not supposed to really notice that it is an acrostic. It's just a clever rhyming poem that evokes imagery of magic!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful comments -- great to hear from you!!
Comment from nomi338
Now you have made me afraid. I admit that I am somewhat of a wise guy. I often say naughty things when I should not and I may have already offended some wand wielding magician who is as at this very moment cooking up some awesome consequence for my inappropriate action. Yikes.
I love the poem and the acrostic is perfect.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Now you have made me afraid. I admit that I am somewhat of a wise guy. I often say naughty things when I should not and I may have already offended some wand wielding magician who is as at this very moment cooking up some awesome consequence for my inappropriate action. Yikes.
I love the poem and the acrostic is perfect.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Thank you so very much for your fun comments -- great to hear from you!!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Acrostic and rhyme in one glimpse, this is quite an achievement. Fairy tale and magic, what a treat! I like the beginning :"Along the road not far from here
Beyond the edge of here and now,
Reality's veil is torn in two
And magic lives in there somehow.
Close by, you'll find the fairy guild
And it's to them you must appeal,
Do not get smart or loose your tongue." Good luck with your writing and the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Acrostic and rhyme in one glimpse, this is quite an achievement. Fairy tale and magic, what a treat! I like the beginning :"Along the road not far from here
Beyond the edge of here and now,
Reality's veil is torn in two
And magic lives in there somehow.
Close by, you'll find the fairy guild
And it's to them you must appeal,
Do not get smart or loose your tongue." Good luck with your writing and the contest.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The fairy's wand works wonders. I like your image of the wand. And the thought that nursery rhymes bring magic. We can still be young at heart and remember the old nursey rhymes of yesteryear. Our children loved them.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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The fairy's wand works wonders. I like your image of the wand. And the thought that nursery rhymes bring magic. We can still be young at heart and remember the old nursey rhymes of yesteryear. Our children loved them.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review -- great to hear from you!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fine presentation and I heard recently that the in the fairy world decisions can be quite harsh and you confirmed that here. Not one word wasted in this clever acrostic, live life honesty and well as it is soon all over, this should do well in the contest, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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This is a fine presentation and I heard recently that the in the fairy world decisions can be quite harsh and you confirmed that here. Not one word wasted in this clever acrostic, live life honesty and well as it is soon all over, this should do well in the contest, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Thank you so very much for this wonderful review -- great to hear from you!!
