Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This sounds like an agruement that would happen between a brother and sister. But I would think it would be the boy who would like and catch the newt and not the girl I like how smart she is to release the newt back into his true habitat.
This is a well done loop poem.
Keep writing
Joan

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019

Thanks, Joan

reply by dragonpoet on 22-Dec-2019

You're welcome. Happy Holidays
Joan

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

They are cute. But they're not pets. They must think some giant alien has captured them and is saving them for a snack later. They need to be free. I'm glad she let him go.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019

Thank you, Cindy!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Wow! This is one of the best loops I have ever read and I wish I had a six for you, a smooth flowing write filled with warm sentiments for the newt and now I want to kiss one! Much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019

Ah! Don't kiss them. I shouldn't have written that. Their skin secretes neurotoxins that can paralyze you!

reply by Dolly'sPoems on 19-Sep-2019

Oh dear? Really? Oh my goodness, thank you for telling me, but I am unlikely to touch one! Love Dolly x