Comment from dovemarie

Excellent

Dear Ricky, I think you dream of your son Jason always when you are half-asleep. I'm not sure of all the question marks in your poetry. Sometimes they're difficult to read, but I especially liked your second to last stanza. Dove

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019

I've been utilizing this "think of my son before wanting to sleep"
For quite a few years now and it works so well.
First I yawn and it relaxes me.
And, then within 1 to 2 minutes.
I'm out like a light!
And, it has never failed me.
Thanks,
Ricky

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

The imagery in this is stunning and quite clever, my friend. Cotton candy drifting on the breeze is a lovely image of clouds. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019

I try but Heaven?
So Damn hard if your going to Hell!
Thanks,
Angel.
Can I hitch a ride?
Ricky

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

As grief lays heavy on your soul Ricky it is hard to cope with life, but death means the end and no more writing or appreciating the wonders of life, I wish you well, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019

Thank you my dear.
As for Death?
It's a long lost friend.
Ricky

reply by Dolly'sPoems on 18-Sep-2019

Oh Ricky, my heart goes out to you my friend x

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

In continuation, now all words, dreams go through reality, only to word the fountain of life with no thirst, no hunger, no pain, and no fear; only everything on reality term; well said, well done.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019

Thanks Al.
Heaven's a hard write, especially after being to Hell, so many times.
Rick