Aiona's Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 73 "Origins"Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.
6 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Nicely done 1-5-7 poem. It is a good definiton of pen. A sharpened feather was the first pen. That is a quill dipped in ink. I think it would be hard to write with a quill.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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Nicely done 1-5-7 poem. It is a good definiton of pen. A sharpened feather was the first pen. That is a quill dipped in ink. I think it would be hard to write with a quill.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 09-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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Thanks, Joan
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Any time, Aiona.
Joan
Comment from susand3022
And this certainly explains so very much, Aiona! I've never seen how a quill pen writes. It's a natural calligraphy producer. That explains why letters were formed the way they were during the time when quill pens were so predominately in use. It must be hard to write with them. You do a great job! :)
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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And this certainly explains so very much, Aiona! I've never seen how a quill pen writes. It's a natural calligraphy producer. That explains why letters were formed the way they were during the time when quill pens were so predominately in use. It must be hard to write with them. You do a great job! :)
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Thanks, Susan.
Comment from Mike Stevens
A fine collaborative haiku, Aiona--interesting fact, pen also comes from the Icelandic word for 'Stop before you write something to embarrass yourself in front of the entire reading world." I didn't, and I am!
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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A fine collaborative haiku, Aiona--interesting fact, pen also comes from the Icelandic word for 'Stop before you write something to embarrass yourself in front of the entire reading world." I didn't, and I am!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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LOL! Thanks, Mike.
Comment from Halfree
Have read some of your postings .... this one...well! a definition ...not a page turner.. But do keep on writing ... think you have talent.
Keep at it, hope to read you again.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Have read some of your postings .... this one...well! a definition ...not a page turner.. But do keep on writing ... think you have talent.
Keep at it, hope to read you again.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Thanks, Halfree! It's good to get reviews from you!
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver a structurally sound 1-5-7 with correct line and syllable count. The content is clever as pens are an item many will relate to on this site. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver a structurally sound 1-5-7 with correct line and syllable count. The content is clever as pens are an item many will relate to on this site. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Thanks!
Comment from Cindy Warren
I learned something new. Why would they name a writing tool after a home for pigs? They didn't. It's Latin. How did the quill pen work? They must have been difficult to use.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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I learned something new. Why would they name a writing tool after a home for pigs? They didn't. It's Latin. How did the quill pen work? They must have been difficult to use.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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LOL!
