Comment from tempeste

Exceptional

Very romantic...Iove the word Rhapsody and how you we able to blend it into your poem and find the rhyme.

It's also the perfect word to describe love or a love story which flows , evolves and has many contrasting elements and moods just like a rhapsody in music.

I love bees so tiny yet their contribution to our survival is priceless.

I like to feed them ..including wasps that love cooked chicken.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2019

CIAO TEMPESTE: Again...I thank you. You are appreciated. I'm glad that you like the word, "Rhapsody. " Now it means more to me. I've gotta dream up a rhyme...so I can use it next time. (smile)...It amazes me how at times you can feel like I feel. God bless you, my friend. CIAO: rhonnie69.

Comment from HarryT

Good

Did you know honey bees die after stinging? "When a honey bee stings a person, it cannot pull the barbed stinger back out. It leaves behind not only the stinger, but also part of its abdomen and digestive tract, plus muscles and nerves. This massive abdominal rupture kills the honey bee. Honey bees are the only bees to die after stinging." See https://www.google.com/search?client=firefox-b-1-d&sxsrf=ACYBGNQ4XlUPTFb2S__pN8Fh_VYZcSNVmQ%3A1568649445570&ei=5bB_XYunIoSWsAX91abQCA&q=do+honey+bees+sting&oq=do+honey+bees+s&gs_l=psy-ab.1.0.0l10.11391.14226..16975...0.2..0.130.531.1j4......0....1..gws-wiz.......0i71j0i67j0i20i263.F0HMpuoA7eM

I don't think you want your honey to die. Sorry I must only award a good for this effort.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019

HELLO HARRY: I thank you for your review. You are appreciated. Remember, my friend. We're dealing with poetry here...not science. In science everything is as it is. In poetry everything is as the poet say it is. That's the wonder and magic of poetry. In poetry, I'm free to be me...and there's no wrong way...for me to be what I be. "YEAH...That's POETRY." I thank you again, my friend. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Oh, yeah -- beauty and thorns -- we all take the hand knowing the overall package! ;) :) I would only suggest, perhaps, less capitalization as the mind's eye is so focused on putting emphasis on one word after the other that the overall vision is 'missed'.... :) ;) A wonderful offering for the morning - thank you! :) Yvette

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019

HELLO Y.M. ROGER: As usual...you are appreciated. You are my reader. That makes you important to me, lady. My readers are why I write. You encourage me. Thank you. Y.M.Roger. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

Love the poem and its image. A rose is definitely a super flower that brings out the beauty of a person. The lyrics are well-written. I hope they become a song one day.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2019