Morning Mist
A 'Diminished Hexaverse' Contest Offering17 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are clear, descriptive and creative. The reader
pondered on "Dawn's Magical Mist". What a gift it is. The artwork
is perfect and compliments both the theme and words of this poem.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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The author's words are clear, descriptive and creative. The reader
pondered on "Dawn's Magical Mist". What a gift it is. The artwork
is perfect and compliments both the theme and words of this poem.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your review this morning!!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-A well written poem
with vivid imagery.
-The alliteration in verse
one emphasizes the scene
with "magical mist."
-Good concluding lines, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-A well written poem
with vivid imagery.
-The alliteration in verse
one emphasizes the scene
with "magical mist."
-Good concluding lines, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your positive and detailed review!
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Darlene Franklin
I love the first stanza, the spread of the morning mist. I'm not as certain about the importance of it life continuing. Unless it lays in the importance of water? I love the entries for this contest.
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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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I love the first stanza, the spread of the morning mist. I'm not as certain about the importance of it life continuing. Unless it lays in the importance of water? I love the entries for this contest.
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Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your review!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Hitcher
It is the first time I have come across this form friend and I must say I Like it! I also like what you have done with the form and enjoyed the visuals conjured up in my minds eye. I will definitely have a go at this form in the future, thank you and good luck!
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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It is the first time I have come across this form friend and I must say I Like it! I also like what you have done with the form and enjoyed the visuals conjured up in my minds eye. I will definitely have a go at this form in the future, thank you and good luck!
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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You have truly put a smile on my face with this awesome review, Hitch -- so glad I could entertain your mind's eye!! Thank you so very much for those stars and, especially, for your comments here!! Here's wishing you a wonderful week ahead!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Until morow's morn nature bond shall continue - this is such a beautiful and powerful image that can extend to how a human feels at the break of a new day. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your contest
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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Until morow's morn nature bond shall continue - this is such a beautiful and powerful image that can extend to how a human feels at the break of a new day. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your contest
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Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your positive and detailed review!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wow! I felt these words here and this is a very unusual and difficult form performed here so perfectly and I loved the sentiments too, I wish you luck with the contest, this is the best one I have read so far, I think it could be a winner, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Wow! I felt these words here and this is a very unusual and difficult form performed here so perfectly and I loved the sentiments too, I wish you luck with the contest, this is the best one I have read so far, I think it could be a winner, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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You have truly put a smile on my face with this wonderful review, Dolly -- to hear that you 'felt the words' brings a small tear to my eye!! Thank you so very much for those stars and, especially, for your comments here!! Here's wishing you a spectacular week ahead!
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is the way poetry should be written. Each line paints an image. It is easy to view in your mind's eye the scenes you describe so well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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This is the way poetry should be written. Each line paints an image. It is easy to view in your mind's eye the scenes you describe so well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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You have truly put a smile on my face with this wonderful review, Monsieur Bowling -- thank you so very much for those stars and, especially, for your comments here!! Here's wishing you a spectacular week ahead!
