Morning Mist
A 'Diminished Hexaverse' Contest Offering17 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This diminished hexaverse poem, Morning Mist, has the proper syllable and line formatting and gives a new meaning to the protective mists that dampen the land that soon meets the sun. Nice.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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This diminished hexaverse poem, Morning Mist, has the proper syllable and line formatting and gives a new meaning to the protective mists that dampen the land that soon meets the sun. Nice.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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Thanx, Bill, for stopping in on this one! ;) Yvette
Comment from LisaMay
This poem's subject - morning mist - describes a time of day and visual atmospheric that delights me.
"whisp'ring of dew drops 'neath filigree wings" is a beautiful way to describe it.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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This poem's subject - morning mist - describes a time of day and visual atmospheric that delights me.
"whisp'ring of dew drops 'neath filigree wings" is a beautiful way to describe it.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Thank you so very much for your awesome review!!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Mystery Writer. That's an excellent job in meeting the requirements style of a diminished hexaverse. It is certainly an unusual writing style and takes some creativeness to accomplish. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Hello Mystery Writer. That's an excellent job in meeting the requirements style of a diminished hexaverse. It is certainly an unusual writing style and takes some creativeness to accomplish. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your review -- much appreciated!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Well, well, well -- another example of your poetic ability, I dare say, and it's beautiful. This is also a format with which I am not the least bit familiar, so thank you for the notes.
I liked this so much I will bookcase it and perhaps try one using yours as an example!
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Well, well, well -- another example of your poetic ability, I dare say, and it's beautiful. This is also a format with which I am not the least bit familiar, so thank you for the notes.
I liked this so much I will bookcase it and perhaps try one using yours as an example!
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Wow -- thanx so much for this review, Dawn -- this was a contest that I sponsored, but I had NO idea the form would be such a bear to work with.... I managed to wrangle this out on the front porch yesterday evening I adjusted it a bit this morning before P-T. Glad you enjoyed it, ma'am! ;) :) Take care! ;)
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Well, let me tell you -- I loved yours so much, I wrote one. :))
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Hooray!! ;) I can't wait to read it!! ;)
Comment from dragonpoet
You did a good job with this new and difficult form. A clear image is evoked by the words. Good choice of artwork.
Good luck in the prompt contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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You did a good job with this new and difficult form. A clear image is evoked by the words. Good choice of artwork.
Good luck in the prompt contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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It was definitely a 'different' feel to the writing in this format, Joan -- glad you enjoyed!
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You're welcome.
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Comment from Ronni
This new form poem here, in theme and tone notes and celebrates nature's serene transition from dawn's emerging awakening, buoyed
in spirt and and expanse, retreats and reposes so subtly, that when
morn comes, in interim was hugging this mystic and magnificent
secret. Perfect picture tie in, fascinating presentation indeed!
Thanks for sharing. Good luck in contest entry!
Ronni
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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This new form poem here, in theme and tone notes and celebrates nature's serene transition from dawn's emerging awakening, buoyed
in spirt and and expanse, retreats and reposes so subtly, that when
morn comes, in interim was hugging this mystic and magnificent
secret. Perfect picture tie in, fascinating presentation indeed!
Thanks for sharing. Good luck in contest entry!
Ronni
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this unusual one, Ronni -- thank you for your awesome review!!
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a very lovely verse and a perfect entry for the Diminished Hexaverse prompt. The beauty of the meaningful words flow easily from stanza to stanza. A delight to read.
Melissa
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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This is a very lovely verse and a perfect entry for the Diminished Hexaverse prompt. The beauty of the meaningful words flow easily from stanza to stanza. A delight to read.
Melissa
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this unusual one, Melissa -- thank you for your awesome review!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the weather changes and seasons come and go while we can only watch and admire the wonder of nature that we can not stop or start as we wish it all happens as God planned.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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A very well-written poem about the weather changes and seasons come and go while we can only watch and admire the wonder of nature that we can not stop or start as we wish it all happens as God planned.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Thank you so very much for your review on this one, Sandra - very appreciated!
Comment from Louise Michelle
This is the second Hexaverse I'm reading - what an interesting style.
Loved the image and you did such a good job pairing your words. 'neath filigree wings' - great line. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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This is the second Hexaverse I'm reading - what an interesting style.
Loved the image and you did such a good job pairing your words. 'neath filigree wings' - great line. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this unusual one, Louse -- thank you for your awesome review!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your lovely poem makes excellent use of descriptive specifics to paint a lovely scene--the morning elements of nature at work. The alliteration is an impressive enhancement.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Your lovely poem makes excellent use of descriptive specifics to paint a lovely scene--the morning elements of nature at work. The alliteration is an impressive enhancement.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your encouraging review this morning!
