Women...
We may have a tendency to over-think things...23 total reviews
Comment from Darlene Franklin
I love a s tory like this, that has me completely fooled until Jameson was squatting down. Although I did think the twins' names were rather odd . . . Good luck with the contest!
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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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I love a s tory like this, that has me completely fooled until Jameson was squatting down. Although I did think the twins' names were rather odd . . . Good luck with the contest!
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Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your time in reading and reviewing this evening! Your positive comments and good luck wishes are greatly appreciated!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Sallyo
I'm... well, let's say I went back and read it again! Some things that seemed odd made sense. Only one thing still seems a little off... STRIDE? C'mon now!
good-bye.
goodbye
keep he's hands
keep his hands
alright
all right
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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I'm... well, let's say I went back and read it again! Some things that seemed odd made sense. Only one thing still seems a little off... STRIDE? C'mon now!
good-bye.
goodbye
keep he's hands
keep his hands
alright
all right
Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Yeah, okay, that was one that I didn't make 'generic' enough...lol! I changed the 'stride' to step because a Pomeranian 'striding' is more than silly - I agree!! Thanks for your catches, my lady, and for those wonderful stars!! You have a great week ahead!!
Comment from Cindy Warren
You had me fooled. I thought the creep had crept out on his wife. Tho I'm sure a Pomeranians that have just given birth need some loving too. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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You had me fooled. I thought the creep had crept out on his wife. Tho I'm sure a Pomeranians that have just given birth need some loving too. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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LOL! :) Naaah, I wouldn't give such a creep a role in my short story...
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