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We may have a tendency to over-think things...23 total reviews
Comment from tfawcus
Even though I was expecting a twist at the end, you managed to keep it so well hidden that it still took me by surprise. Clever writing. I imagine that this could do well in the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Even though I was expecting a twist at the end, you managed to keep it so well hidden that it still took me by surprise. Clever writing. I imagine that this could do well in the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Hooray! So glad you enjoyed little Nichole and her Jameson, Tony - thank you for the review!
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Such a purely sweet story. One would never know it was a dog going through such machinations about his master. The composition is such that the reader is convinced it is his wife. Such a surprise to read it is man's best friend, a dog! Very convincing, especially with the title. Good luck.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Such a purely sweet story. One would never know it was a dog going through such machinations about his master. The composition is such that the reader is convinced it is his wife. Such a surprise to read it is man's best friend, a dog! Very convincing, especially with the title. Good luck.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Hooray! So glad you enjoyed little Nichole and her Jameson, Raffaelina - thank you for the review!
Comment from Tpa
A very enjoyable story about the inner conflict of your main character that finds a diversion from the norm, which can lead to disaster as it almost did in your yarn, which you did very well.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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A very enjoyable story about the inner conflict of your main character that finds a diversion from the norm, which can lead to disaster as it almost did in your yarn, which you did very well.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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I am not sure what disaster you are referring to, but I do thank you for your review!
Comment from Ronni
Really hilarious mystery mind teasing bender!
Intrigue and suspense captured from very beginning to belly
laughing end! This was a 'dog' story in disguise beyond even a
hint of illusion or sheer surprise! Truly some sexy Pomeranians
that are sure to be the envy and despair of any other breed...even
human one....LOL...
Fantastic magician talent and tease, great job!
Ronni
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Really hilarious mystery mind teasing bender!
Intrigue and suspense captured from very beginning to belly
laughing end! This was a 'dog' story in disguise beyond even a
hint of illusion or sheer surprise! Truly some sexy Pomeranians
that are sure to be the envy and despair of any other breed...even
human one....LOL...
Fantastic magician talent and tease, great job!
Ronni
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Oh, I am so very glad you enjoyed my little 'Nichole' and her Jameson! Thank you for your time and your wonderful review!!
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an excellent contribution to the contest. The dog nature of Nichole remained a disguised mystery until nearly the end.This shows how well the story was crafted. Congratulations, and good luck in the voting.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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This is an excellent contribution to the contest. The dog nature of Nichole remained a disguised mystery until nearly the end.This shows how well the story was crafted. Congratulations, and good luck in the voting.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Oh, I am so very glad you enjoyed my little 'Nichole' and her Jameson! Thank you for your time and your wonderful review!!
Comment from Thomas Bowling
You have written the winner. There is no way anyone could see the reveal coming. Someone posted a list of fifty things your dog's actions mean. The author teased that one of the items in the list would be the surprising reason your dog jumps on you after he hasn't seen you for a while. I skipped ahead and found it. The reason is he is excited to see you. WTF? I didn't need a list to tell me that.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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You have written the winner. There is no way anyone could see the reveal coming. Someone posted a list of fifty things your dog's actions mean. The author teased that one of the items in the list would be the surprising reason your dog jumps on you after he hasn't seen you for a while. I skipped ahead and found it. The reason is he is excited to see you. WTF? I didn't need a list to tell me that.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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You never fail to bring a smile, Thomas -- thank you for that and thank you more than that for such an awesome review! So glad you enjoyed little Nichole and her Jameson!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. You really did a great job on this one. I was reading along thinking one thing and you were writing a long knowing something different. What a great story. Overthinking is exactly what I did. You got me. lol good luck in the contest. This is a dandy.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Hello mystery writer. You really did a great job on this one. I was reading along thinking one thing and you were writing a long knowing something different. What a great story. Overthinking is exactly what I did. You got me. lol good luck in the contest. This is a dandy.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Hooray! I got Z -- so very glad you enjoyed my little 'Nichole' and her Jameson!! Thank you for your time and your review!
Comment from Dawn Munro
You are a minx, you know that? HAHAHAHA! You had me convinced, and just a little uncomfortable with the display of passion your protagonist was remembering. (HAHAHAHA!)
This is wonderful! Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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You are a minx, you know that? HAHAHAHA! You had me convinced, and just a little uncomfortable with the display of passion your protagonist was remembering. (HAHAHAHA!)
This is wonderful! Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Mrrrroooow!! ;) :) LOL -- gotta watch me, eh?! ;) :) Thank you for this wonderful review, Dawn -- I do so appreciate your time!
Comment from Patty Palmer
what a great story! I was absolutely surprised when I saw that Nicole was a dog. But as soon as you said pomeranian it all fell into place. Good job!
Patty
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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what a great story! I was absolutely surprised when I saw that Nicole was a dog. But as soon as you said pomeranian it all fell into place. Good job!
Patty
Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your time reading and reviewing this evening! Your positive comments are greatly appreciated!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Funny story you made think that the Lady in distress was actually a woman, a bright new mom. ð???But you cleverly maneuvered the story until the end. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Funny story you made think that the Lady in distress was actually a woman, a bright new mom. ð???But you cleverly maneuvered the story until the end. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your time reading and reviewing this evening! Your positive comments and good luck wishes are greatly appreciated!
