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We may have a tendency to over-think things...23 total reviews
Comment from shaffer40
You convinced me it was the wife. Clever story with a hilarious surprise ending. The information at the bottom, about the breed, is interesting, too. Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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You convinced me it was the wife. Clever story with a hilarious surprise ending. The information at the bottom, about the breed, is interesting, too. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Thanks for stopping in for the review, Shaffer -- much appreciated! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
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You're welcome for sure.
Comment from Sally Law
You had us in a soap opera scene and then switched to "My Favorite Pup!" I loved this and you had me going until the level thing. "He stooped down to my level." Aha! You wicked girl--you're such a tease! I am sick for a sixer because you had me hook, line and sinker on this one.
Sending you my best today as always. A superb offering.
Sal xo
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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You had us in a soap opera scene and then switched to "My Favorite Pup!" I loved this and you had me going until the level thing. "He stooped down to my level." Aha! You wicked girl--you're such a tease! I am sick for a sixer because you had me hook, line and sinker on this one.
Sending you my best today as always. A superb offering.
Sal xo
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Oooooo...wicked, eh? I like it!! My favoritest (LOL!) role I ever played was the Wicked Witch of the West at the big amphitheater production my Senior year in high school.... great times! Glad I still got it - LOL!! ;) :) Thanx for the awesome review, ma'am -- and here's sending my best right back atcha!! ;) ;) Yvette
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I am savoring that thought. I played Juliet in a middle school production. A blonde Juliet nonetheless.
Comment from JudyE
Well, you reeled me in like a fish. Especially parading in front of the TV clad in just a necklace! That was a touch of genius. lol Good luck in the contest. I'm sure it will do well.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Well, you reeled me in like a fish. Especially parading in front of the TV clad in just a necklace! That was a touch of genius. lol Good luck in the contest. I'm sure it will do well.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Ha-Ha! Gotcha!! ;) :) Glad you enjoyed this one, Lady J -- always good to hear from you over here! ;) Little Nichole and her Jameson graciously accept your compliment (LOL!)... ;) :) Thank you so much! ;) Yvette
Comment from poetwatch
Dear Author for a moment there I thought you had forgotten to warn your readers of possible sexual content. :0 :) You have a knack for stirring the blood of the male species where women are concern. After the first or second birth of a child the lady feels less desirable, but she shouldn't. A woman that is loved is loved much more after the birth of children. I guess it also pertains to dogs. :) This is a good entry for The Door Slammed contest.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Dear Author for a moment there I thought you had forgotten to warn your readers of possible sexual content. :0 :) You have a knack for stirring the blood of the male species where women are concern. After the first or second birth of a child the lady feels less desirable, but she shouldn't. A woman that is loved is loved much more after the birth of children. I guess it also pertains to dogs. :) This is a good entry for The Door Slammed contest.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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LOL - you are too funny, Jose! I am glad that you enjoyed little Nichole and her Jameson -- those stars are a wonderful start to a busy day...THANK YOU!! :) :) Have a great day over there, sir, and take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
You've really done a superb job of misdirection with this one. I was totally fooled by this one until the very end. I was for sure that you were talking about a woman with twins and not a dog with puppies. This was beautifully and cleverly written. I enjoyed reading this humorous and well written work. Very well done!
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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You've really done a superb job of misdirection with this one. I was totally fooled by this one until the very end. I was for sure that you were talking about a woman with twins and not a dog with puppies. This was beautifully and cleverly written. I enjoyed reading this humorous and well written work. Very well done!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Thank you for the wonderful review -- so glad you enjoyed my little Nichole and her Jameson!!
Comment from Raul1
This is a well written story. It has a chance of winning the contest! It is original and concise to read. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest! Nice work.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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This is a well written story. It has a chance of winning the contest! It is original and concise to read. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest! Nice work.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Thank you.
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You're welcome.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Well done. Might be a winner. I suspected the surprise early on (why would babies be sleeping in Mom's bed), but I wasn't sure till you said Jameson squatted down to her level. It's a common trick, but you did it so well it seemed fresh. :)
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Well done. Might be a winner. I suspected the surprise early on (why would babies be sleeping in Mom's bed), but I wasn't sure till you said Jameson squatted down to her level. It's a common trick, but you did it so well it seemed fresh. :)
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your review, Phyllis -- it was a fun one to write!!
Comment from Mia Twysted
Life does indeed change after the birth of children even for animals. I know in my house the dogs have always loved but looked al little sadder when they were left out or behind. I always make sure to tell them good-bye myself.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Life does indeed change after the birth of children even for animals. I know in my house the dogs have always loved but looked al little sadder when they were left out or behind. I always make sure to tell them good-bye myself.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Thank you for such a heart-felt review!
Comment from Peter Nwaobi
I enjoyed reading this piece. Every new paragraph got me wanting more to. No correction whatsoever. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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I enjoyed reading this piece. Every new paragraph got me wanting more to. No correction whatsoever. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Glad you enjoyed the twist at the end. Thank you for your review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written story about the dog that first think Jameson us mad at her for some reason when he slammed the door and drive off without saying goodbye when he returns everything seems to be okay. .
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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A very well-written story about the dog that first think Jameson us mad at her for some reason when he slammed the door and drive off without saying goodbye when he returns everything seems to be okay. .
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Thank you so very much for your review of little Nichole and her Jameson!
