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Rebirth

a weather via diminished hexaverse

6 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This diminished hexaverse poem, Rebirth, has the proper syllable and line formatting and paces out the time between the killing frost and grave blanket snow, and the melting, remnants of what will again be life. Nice.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
    Thank you for taking time to visit my portfolio.

    Glad you enjoyed the read and reviewed my wee poem.

    My favourite season is autumn but winter and spring make good subject too.

    Ciao!




Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Exceptional
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Hello there, my friend. First I'd like to say congratulations on placing this wonderful piece in the contest. I love this Diminished Hexaverse style, I've never tried this one, will have to do so. Well done!!! ~Kerry

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2019

Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Congratulations on Third Place!! ;) :) Oh, I can almost feel my feet want to dance to your lively offering -- great job!! ;) Thanx so very much for joining the fun on the new form -- the weather shall never be the same!! LOL! Take care! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2019

reply by the author on 20-Sep-2019
    Thank you Yvette for the compliments.
    I love your entry... it's very poetic ...a quality I have not yet mastered. I also dig the colour scheme you chose.

    In all honesty in was about to vote for "Morning Mist" but then I read "Heaven Sent ".

    ...it describes something I love .. I love burying my rose in roses and inhaling their beautiful scent and licking up the raindrops from the petals so it got my vote this time ( biggrin ).

    Glad my wee poem gave you happy feet ! ( smile )

    It's an interesting and challenging format , I enjoyed giving it a go... did you invent it ?

    All the best for the weekend!
Comment from artisart4u
Exceptional
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This is a very beautiful poem about the change in weather.
You have it like it is suppose to be written.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2019

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
    Your lovely review and shiny 6 star vote are a great encouragement.

    I'm glad you loved my wee poem.

    Thank you so much !
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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where did you find your picture? Quite impressive. The weatherman should like a picture image such as this. Like the wording of your poem also. When it comes to weather, we want decent weather. No earthquakes. Or hurricanes.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2019

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
    I found it on Internet .. I punched in Winter and Spring pics together ..

    I thought this one was beautiful too.

    Earthquakes are something we have to deal with now and then ..just like the U.S.A has to deal with tornados and hurricanes.

    Glad you liked my wording.

    Thank you for the positive vote !
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This meets the contest requirements nicely as you adhere to the rules of form beautifully and deliver a flowing and well penned piece. It seems to be more about a season than the weather, but I think there is enough weather reference built into the imagery to keep this entry safe. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2019

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
    Thank you for the kind review..

    Hopefully the judges give my wee poem thumbs up if not my bad ..

    I'm definitely not going to edit it if they give me a chance . ( smile )