Spellbinding Love
Sweet dreams...16 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Diana,
NIce mix of words and artwork. It seems this poem was written for the pictures as an ekphrastic poem.
This tells of a love we all wish to find.
Congrats of tying for third in the contest.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
Diana,
NIce mix of words and artwork. It seems this poem was written for the pictures as an ekphrastic poem.
This tells of a love we all wish to find.
Congrats of tying for third in the contest.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 23-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2020
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Thank you! There are so many talents that enter these, I am honored it was considered! xoxo
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You're welcome.
Joan
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You're welcome.
Joan
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Well my friend, I can certainly see why this one places. It has a gentleness to the story and the dreaminess of fantasy. Presentation is lovely and you know I love a good romantic piece of writing! smiling. Well done and congrats, you deserve the win! xoxo deborah
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
Well my friend, I can certainly see why this one places. It has a gentleness to the story and the dreaminess of fantasy. Presentation is lovely and you know I love a good romantic piece of writing! smiling. Well done and congrats, you deserve the win! xoxo deborah
Comment Written 20-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Thanks again! I was pretty surprised actually! Very hard to please these judges, so definitely an honor. xoxo
Comment from Joan E.
Congratulations on having your 5-7-5 so well received in the competition. I admired your ekphrastic poem and interpretation. Your use of alliteration added to the intensity. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
Congratulations on having your 5-7-5 so well received in the competition. I admired your ekphrastic poem and interpretation. Your use of alliteration added to the intensity. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Awe! Thank you Joan! I was really surprised. I'd almost forgotten about it since I entered it so many months ago! Glad the judges liked it and appreciate your encouraging comment! :) xoxo
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A great way to start 2020! Have a pleasant weekend when it arrives as well. Smiles- Joan
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And you as well!! ;) xoxo
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
this is really a fantasy poem. The image expresses how the woman is dreaming about a fantasy world of royalty. I can see her rising up, dressing as a princess and stepping into a carriage.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
this is really a fantasy poem. The image expresses how the woman is dreaming about a fantasy world of royalty. I can see her rising up, dressing as a princess and stepping into a carriage.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Funny you say that as I was just thinking about doing one with a carriage! great minds think alike i believe! appreciate your review and supportive encouragement! xoxo
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Diana. Your poem is technically sound for a 5-7-5 and I like the poem. Your author notes are outstanding. That is an excellent appraisal of the picture and verse. Good luck in the contest. Robert
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
Hello Diana. Your poem is technically sound for a 5-7-5 and I like the poem. Your author notes are outstanding. That is an excellent appraisal of the picture and verse. Good luck in the contest. Robert
Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Thanks Robert! This picture is on a journal that I have had for about 15 years and I?ve always loved it so I thought what a great picture to use to do a poem to! Thanks so much for stopping by to read it! xoxo
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You're welcome
Comment from Sally Law
Another full package offering, dear Diana. This is magical. I just know this is a winner, too. Please accept my six today with my best for the upcoming contest,
Sal xoxo
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
Another full package offering, dear Diana. This is magical. I just know this is a winner, too. Please accept my six today with my best for the upcoming contest,
Sal xoxo
Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Thank you Sally! This picture has been on a journal of mine that I?ve had for about 15 years and I thought what an exquisite picture to write a poem about! Glad that you appreciate it and thank you so much for your kind support with your six! xoxo
Comment from Janetsue
This is an excellent entry in the 5-7-5 contest, my friend. Spellbinding love and sweet fantasy dreams are a dynamite theme. You could even use it to write a terrific story. Best wishes!!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
This is an excellent entry in the 5-7-5 contest, my friend. Spellbinding love and sweet fantasy dreams are a dynamite theme. You could even use it to write a terrific story. Best wishes!!
Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Thank you! This picture is on a journal that I?ve had for about 15 years and I just love it and I thought what a great image to use for a poem! Thanks so much for appreciating it! xoxo
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You're truly welcome, Diana!! Hugs
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver a technically sound 5-7-5 with correct line and syllable count. The content is light and whimsical leaving the reader uplifted and joyful. Good luck in the judging and tank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver a technically sound 5-7-5 with correct line and syllable count. The content is light and whimsical leaving the reader uplifted and joyful. Good luck in the judging and tank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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And thank you for appreciating it! I?ve had this picture on a journal that I?ve had for about 15 years and thought it was a perfect image to use to write a poem to! xoxo
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Hi Diana
A beautifully crafted 5-7-5 poem that paints such a vivid picture.
Your words marry perfectly with the chosen artwork.......absolutely delightful
Mitchell
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
Hi Diana
A beautifully crafted 5-7-5 poem that paints such a vivid picture.
Your words marry perfectly with the chosen artwork.......absolutely delightful
Mitchell
Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Thank you Mitchell! I am so happy that you enjoyed it! It?s so much fun to grab a picture and see what you can write based on the image! Appreciate your supportive feedback very much! xoxo
Comment from country ranch writer
A fantasy in ones mind to be cherished by one so special yet never to be introduced except in ones dream. In the real worl it is filled with unhappiness and death.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
A fantasy in ones mind to be cherished by one so special yet never to be introduced except in ones dream. In the real worl it is filled with unhappiness and death.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
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Dreams are the only place that fantasies are safe!! Thank you so much for honoring this with your precious ?6?! I am humbled! xoxo
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Awe!