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Comment from country ranch writer
As one becomes older like her Grandma we can't move as fast. People have no consideration or patience for the elderly and frail of mind and body.
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As one becomes older like her Grandma we can't move as fast. People have no consideration or patience for the elderly and frail of mind and body.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2019
Comment from Mia Twysted
I love how the poem goes with the picture.
"Crossing she made a bus stop." - without the picture, one can get confused on what she was crossing. In fact, at first, it got me a little lost because the sentence sounded so strange to me.
Things could stand to be a bit more clear I believe, but that is just my opinion, you can take it or leave it as you wish.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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I love how the poem goes with the picture.
"Crossing she made a bus stop." - without the picture, one can get confused on what she was crossing. In fact, at first, it got me a little lost because the sentence sounded so strange to me.
Things could stand to be a bit more clear I believe, but that is just my opinion, you can take it or leave it as you wish.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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HELLO MIA: I thank you for viewing and commenting on my poem. You are appreciated. Mia...you love how the poem goes with the picture. That's exactly why I combined the writing...with the illustration the way that I did. Together they tell a complete clear story. One...explains the other. That's what pics and their captions are all about. Your input is appreciated, Mia.
You have helped me here. Thank you. God bless you, Mia. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh my goodness -- a number of times I have seen something like this happen.... and so many times the 'almost victim' has no idea of what just almost happened! ;) THANK YOU, indeed! ;) :) Yvette
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Oh my goodness -- a number of times I have seen something like this happen.... and so many times the 'almost victim' has no idea of what just almost happened! ;) THANK YOU, indeed! ;) :) Yvette
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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HELLO Y.M. ROGER: I thank you again. You are always appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
