A Full Moon
romancing the Earth28 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
Love this, Melissa. A great entry (last minute) for the one lime poetry contest. The picture was hauntingly beautiful, too.
Sending you my best today and for the contest.
Sal xo
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Love this, Melissa. A great entry (last minute) for the one lime poetry contest. The picture was hauntingly beautiful, too.
Sending you my best today and for the contest.
Sal xo
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Hello Sally. Thanks so much for your kind comments.
Melissa
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made great use of all of your words in this lovely one-liner about the moon. Personification is a lively element in yur vivid description, and the artwork is awesome!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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You have made great use of all of your words in this lovely one-liner about the moon. Personification is a lively element in yur vivid description, and the artwork is awesome!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much, Janice.
Melissa
Comment from Susan Larson
What a beautiful example of personification. This is a poem that belongs in a language arts textbook. While your picture is beautiful, I might rather close my eyes and imagine what your words paint for me. Love it.
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What a beautiful example of personification. This is a poem that belongs in a language arts textbook. While your picture is beautiful, I might rather close my eyes and imagine what your words paint for me. Love it.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Aww, Susan, you have made my day. Thanks so much!!
Melissa
Comment from June Sargent
What a romantic take on the moon romancing the earth! The imagery of lips gently brushing the trees with moonlight - fantastic. I loved this piece. It's a winner for sure.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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What a romantic take on the moon romancing the earth! The imagery of lips gently brushing the trees with moonlight - fantastic. I loved this piece. It's a winner for sure.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Hi June.. Thank you so very much, my friend, for the wonderful review!!
Melissa
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is an excellent example of a one-line poem suitable for the contest. I liked the image of the moon kissing the trees. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the voting.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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This is an excellent example of a one-line poem suitable for the contest. I liked the image of the moon kissing the trees. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the voting.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Hi Susan. I am so delighted that you liked this verse. Thanks so much.
Melissa
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a beautifully penned One Line Poem and a truly worthy contest contribution. The imagery is delightfully vivid and needs no artwork to support it as the words can stand alone when it comes to painting across the reader's imagination. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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This is a beautifully penned One Line Poem and a truly worthy contest contribution. The imagery is delightfully vivid and needs no artwork to support it as the words can stand alone when it comes to painting across the reader's imagination. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Hi MA.. thanks so much for your wonderful review. :)
Melissa
Comment from Joan E.
Your poem is quite tactile with its personification of the Moon. I could almost feel the brushing of its lips across the trees, which the mesmerizing artwork reinforces. Cheers and best wishes in the contest- Joan
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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Your poem is quite tactile with its personification of the Moon. I could almost feel the brushing of its lips across the trees, which the mesmerizing artwork reinforces. Cheers and best wishes in the contest- Joan
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Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Hello Joan. I am truly grateful for your lovely thoughts and comments. Thanks.
Melissa
Comment from lyenochka
Lovely personification of moonlight! So romantic and endearing. Great use of alliteration and assonance! I am rooting for you to do well in the contest!
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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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Lovely personification of moonlight! So romantic and endearing. Great use of alliteration and assonance! I am rooting for you to do well in the contest!
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Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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I really appreciate your review, Helen, and am glad you liked this moonlit verse. Thanks so much. :)
Melissa
