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Comment from tempeste
This poem is full of mystery .... It's a poem that is open to each reader's personal interpretation.
This is mine ...
Sometimes a guy from a distance will observe a girl he fancies thinking not to be seen .. but often the girl in question has noticed that she is being watched ..
Then one day she calls out to him and let's him know that she is aware he 's been keeping an eye on her
....at this point , if the feeling is mutual then secretly she was tickled of the interest he showed in her.
Of course there is also another way to interpret the scene .. if she doesn't fancy him and noticed he has been spying on her from a distance ..she would consider him a stalker.
Either way we all know : It all depends on the female .. she gets to choose not the male.
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This poem is full of mystery .... It's a poem that is open to each reader's personal interpretation.
This is mine ...
Sometimes a guy from a distance will observe a girl he fancies thinking not to be seen .. but often the girl in question has noticed that she is being watched ..
Then one day she calls out to him and let's him know that she is aware he 's been keeping an eye on her
....at this point , if the feeling is mutual then secretly she was tickled of the interest he showed in her.
Of course there is also another way to interpret the scene .. if she doesn't fancy him and noticed he has been spying on her from a distance ..she would consider him a stalker.
Either way we all know : It all depends on the female .. she gets to choose not the male.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
Comment from Gert sherwood
Okay rhonnie69
You made me smile when I read about spilling salt from the spout Mrs. Morton's blue container.
It reminds me when my mother had to use ration coupons to by a bag of sugar which was in a plain paper bag that got wet and there I was watching the sugar scatter to the wet sidewalk.
Maybe I should join fanstory and tell my spilling story?
Gert
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Okay rhonnie69
You made me smile when I read about spilling salt from the spout Mrs. Morton's blue container.
It reminds me when my mother had to use ration coupons to by a bag of sugar which was in a plain paper bag that got wet and there I was watching the sugar scatter to the wet sidewalk.
Maybe I should join fanstory and tell my spilling story?
Gert
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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HELLO GERT: Again...I thank you. You are always appreciated. Thank you for sharing. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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Thank you rhonnie69 for saying that you appreciate my revises of your writings
Gert
Comment from Iza Deleanu
The artwork you choose is stunning and completes so well the poem "walking on a rainy day dressed in sunshine - I will say. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writing.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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The artwork you choose is stunning and completes so well the poem "walking on a rainy day dressed in sunshine - I will say. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writing.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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HELLO IZA: Again... I thank you. As usual...you are always appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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You are welcome and thank you for sharing.
Comment from Raul1
I think the sentence should read walking on a stormy weather. This could make it interesting. Good work. Nice work! Thanks for sharing! It is good and okay.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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I think the sentence should read walking on a stormy weather. This could make it interesting. Good work. Nice work! Thanks for sharing! It is good and okay.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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HELLO PAUL: Thank you for commenting on my poem. Had I written it: walking on a stormy weather; the line would have had eight syllables...and would not fit properly in the 5-7-5. Thank you for your suggestion. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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You're welcome.