Nowhere to Hide
Dark Poem contest entry5 total reviews
Comment from judester
This is a powerful poem. The tormentor lives within, fuelled by our own choices. Strong ending that leaves the reader shaken, suddenly calculating their sins. Bravo. judester
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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This is a powerful poem. The tormentor lives within, fuelled by our own choices. Strong ending that leaves the reader shaken, suddenly calculating their sins. Bravo. judester
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Wow, thank you so much for the excellent review and the big sixer, Judester. I really appreciate the generous stars, I'm glad you liked this dark piece. I hope you have a great weekend, J. Thank you again.
Comment from LyndaS
This is very good darkness. Nothing describes horror better than it is something born within.
Malevolence is such a delicious word. I also like "these wiles that I create." The concept that your own sin speaks to you and is chastising you is, indeed, wicked and creepy.
Contest requirements adhered to. Nicely formatted post with some killer art.
I'd wish you good luck in the contest but that would make me evil and mendacious. Extremely well done. Lynda
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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This is very good darkness. Nothing describes horror better than it is something born within.
Malevolence is such a delicious word. I also like "these wiles that I create." The concept that your own sin speaks to you and is chastising you is, indeed, wicked and creepy.
Contest requirements adhered to. Nicely formatted post with some killer art.
I'd wish you good luck in the contest but that would make me evil and mendacious. Extremely well done. Lynda
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and the huge sixer, Lynda. I dearly appreciate the gracious rating. Yeah, we sure can't have you feeling mendacious. That would just be silly blatherskiteness. Lol. I'm glad you liked this dark piece, L. Thank you again.
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Lol!! Can't stop laughing. You are welcome, poet.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet, a happy Thursday to you. You definitely executed the writing prompt very well. That was both dark and scary, not to mention thought provoking. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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Hello fellow poet, a happy Thursday to you. You definitely executed the writing prompt very well. That was both dark and scary, not to mention thought provoking. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, 13. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this dark piece. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
The sin inside your head and heart warns you cannot hide yourself for the nature and type of sins you committed are about to come to light soon, and you have nowhere to hide; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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The sin inside your head and heart warns you cannot hide yourself for the nature and type of sins you committed are about to come to light soon, and you have nowhere to hide; well said, well done.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Dr. Al.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a well-written scary poem which well meets the contest guidelines. The picture you chose really adds to the macabre atmosphere. The concept that the horror comes from within adds further substance to the piece.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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This is a well-written scary poem which well meets the contest guidelines. The picture you chose really adds to the macabre atmosphere. The concept that the horror comes from within adds further substance to the piece.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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Thank you for the great review and gracious stars, Susan. Have a wonderful weekend.
