The Maw of Madness Departed
The horrors of addiction3 total reviews
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Addiction can happen to anyone and sometimes it takes God's amazing grace to recover. This well crafted poem delves into that topic and presents it well.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Addiction can happen to anyone and sometimes it takes God's amazing grace to recover. This well crafted poem delves into that topic and presents it well.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely as addiction is certainly a dark theme even though it is one that thousands deal with on a daily basis. This is well penned wit vivid imagery and metaphor sprinkled throughout the volatile wording. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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This meets the contest requirements nicely as addiction is certainly a dark theme even though it is one that thousands deal with on a daily basis. This is well penned wit vivid imagery and metaphor sprinkled throughout the volatile wording. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I like how subtle you introduce the reader to fight against hard habits and how in the end Jesus becomes the Savior and the permanent guardian of your life. ""Down and down,
I would descend,
and I made,
so many fake,
good friends,
in my sin!" and then transfer into the light"o find that little ray of hope,
and scream it loud from your throat!
Put down that pen,
and rip up,
that suicide note!
Because God and your family,
doesn't want,
a final goodbye letter,
they just want you to stay,
and just get better!" Good luck with the contest and have a blessed life
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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I like how subtle you introduce the reader to fight against hard habits and how in the end Jesus becomes the Savior and the permanent guardian of your life. ""Down and down,
I would descend,
and I made,
so many fake,
good friends,
in my sin!" and then transfer into the light"o find that little ray of hope,
and scream it loud from your throat!
Put down that pen,
and rip up,
that suicide note!
Because God and your family,
doesn't want,
a final goodbye letter,
they just want you to stay,
and just get better!" Good luck with the contest and have a blessed life
Comment Written 11-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
