Is It Spring?
a contest entry26 total reviews
Comment from Susan Larson
Your personification is fantastic. I was drawn into the drama of your words from the beginning as you built up hope for the climax of the coming of spring. Wishing you well in the contest. I think this is a winner.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Your personification is fantastic. I was drawn into the drama of your words from the beginning as you built up hope for the climax of the coming of spring. Wishing you well in the contest. I think this is a winner.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much, Susan for your high praise and encouragement. I am delighted you were ?drawn into the drama.? Many thanks also for that galaxy of bright stars.
Comment from Cindy Warren
That's lovely, and they're saying by the weekend we might have a couple of spring like days. I wish it really was returning. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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That's lovely, and they're saying by the weekend we might have a couple of spring like days. I wish it really was returning. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Where I live it is hot & humid. We would welcome spring-like weather. Many thanks for your best wishes.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a well written piece which certainly fulfills the writing prompt expectations. The image is lovely, and the rhyme scheme is not hackneyed. Well done!
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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This is a well written piece which certainly fulfills the writing prompt expectations. The image is lovely, and the rhyme scheme is not hackneyed. Well done!
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much, Susan, for your high praise of my spring poem. I am especially pleased you found my rhyme scheme NOT hackneyed.
Comment from Maria Millsaps
I found this poem to be very well crafted, arrayed and dressed in the splendor of spring. The picture is really nice. I liked the poem and the color arrangement compliments the poem.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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I found this poem to be very well crafted, arrayed and dressed in the splendor of spring. The picture is really nice. I liked the poem and the color arrangement compliments the poem.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much, Maria, for your kind praise of my spring poem.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with the contest prompt, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading your poem. Great job with the rhymes and smooth flow. Your words create great imagery, too. The picture is a perfect accompaniment for your well-chosen words describing the beauty of spring. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully with admiration. Jan
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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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You did a great job with the contest prompt, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading your poem. Great job with the rhymes and smooth flow. Your words create great imagery, too. The picture is a perfect accompaniment for your well-chosen words describing the beauty of spring. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully with admiration. Jan
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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I am so delighted, Jan, that you enjoyed the imagery and word choice of my spring poem. Many thanks!
Comment from Darlene Franklin
Spectacular colors and warm air for winter pale cheeks. I love your descriptions for the wonders of springs. Thanks for sharing, and good luck with the contest.
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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Spectacular colors and warm air for winter pale cheeks. I love your descriptions for the wonders of springs. Thanks for sharing, and good luck with the contest.
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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I am so pleased you love the descriptions of spring in my poem, Darlene. Many thanks for your kind praise.
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Yes. you showed and didn't just tell.
