Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock

Excellent

Very delightful poem with a most beautiful picture to welcome the long awaited Spring. Ever anticipated the hopeful signs and scented air so comforting, at last, after the dirge of Winter.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019

Thanks for the encouraging review. To think we have autumn, then a long cold winter before we can even hope for spring~like weather, sigh. Cheers.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your contest entry, Mystery Author. Good job with the prompt. I like the rhymes, the personification of the wind and spring, and the fun message. Your choice of art is a great pairing with your words. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully with admiration. Jan

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019

Thanks for the warm review. Hard to think of spring with a chilly autumn and cold winter coming up here in Canada.....but I can dream huh? Cheers.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Lovely artwork and
nice presentation.
-A well written poem
with effective imagery and rhyme,
along with personification
and alliteration:
"She blew a kiss, with a feathery twist"
-The conclusion is good, too.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019

Thanks for the lovely review. Hard to think of spring with a long Canadian winter to get through first. Haha. Cheers.

reply by Pam (respa) on 11-Sep-2019

You are welcome. I agree! We haven't even finished summer yet.