The Little Boy Who Became a Star
mythology.13 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What a lovely story, Sanku, no wonder you won that contest. It's lovely learning about mythology in other countries. This was really nice. I'm glad the jealous queen was also contrite afterwards. Well done and congratulations. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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What a lovely story, Sanku, no wonder you won that contest. It's lovely learning about mythology in other countries. This was really nice. I'm glad the jealous queen was also contrite afterwards. Well done and congratulations. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 21-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
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Thank you very very much for taking the trouble to read this little story of mine .i am touched that you selected a story to read .Thanks once again.
Comment from Bar62
Well written, good pace, not to fast or to slow. Good choice of story, I felt like I was in a large comfortable room listening to the story with a group of people.
Bar Ponneck
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Well written, good pace, not to fast or to slow. Good choice of story, I felt like I was in a large comfortable room listening to the story with a group of people.
Bar Ponneck
Comment Written 22-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much and I am sorry for the delay .I was not keeping good health
Comment from Darlene Franklin
A lovely retelling. I'll have to wait until after the voting is over to say more, lest I reveal myself during the contest. Thanks for the research and sharing . Good luck!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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A lovely retelling. I'll have to wait until after the voting is over to say more, lest I reveal myself during the contest. Thanks for the research and sharing . Good luck!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think your story is well told and entertaining.
It is well written, easy to follow, and has good structure.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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I think your story is well told and entertaining.
It is well written, easy to follow, and has good structure.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much.sorry for the delayed reply.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I loved this informative and mystical and magical write filled with legends of old and an explanation for the mythology here, much enjoyed and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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I loved this informative and mystical and magical write filled with legends of old and an explanation for the mythology here, much enjoyed and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Thank you .I am sorry for the delayed reply .was quite sick.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Good job and an interesting take on the challenge. It seems a lot of mythology revolves around family jealousy, but that's not surprising, since it exists in families everywhere. :)
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Good job and an interesting take on the challenge. It seems a lot of mythology revolves around family jealousy, but that's not surprising, since it exists in families everywhere. :)
Comment Written 09-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much and I am sorry for the delay in my reply .I was quite unwell.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Dhruv became the king, blessed by seven sages, Lord Vishnu, ruled his father's kingdom, his step mother and step brother could not shine, the little boy of Hindu Mythology, Dhruv became a Pole Star; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Dhruv became the king, blessed by seven sages, Lord Vishnu, ruled his father's kingdom, his step mother and step brother could not shine, the little boy of Hindu Mythology, Dhruv became a Pole Star; well said, well done.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much.sorry for the delayed reply.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello unknown author
First time I read the story of Polaris or Polestar according to the Hindu mythology. I found it well written into a short story for the contest.
Best to you.
Gert
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Hello unknown author
First time I read the story of Polaris or Polestar according to the Hindu mythology. I found it well written into a short story for the contest.
Best to you.
Gert
Comment Written 08-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much and I am sorry for this late reply.I was sick and was not coming here at all.i had forgotten about the contest too. Today I saw that I have won!
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Hello Sanku You are welcome.
I hope what you said is not so
(was not coming here at all
. Please stay with us on Fanstory.
Gert
Comment from Cindy Warren
I guess the injustice was not all that important after all if Dhruv forgot about it. And I can imagine the king would have been very angry with his second wife for driving his son off. In your second paragraph did you mean quiet instead of quite?
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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I guess the injustice was not all that important after all if Dhruv forgot about it. And I can imagine the king would have been very angry with his second wife for driving his son off. In your second paragraph did you mean quiet instead of quite?
Comment Written 08-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much .I am sorry for the delay .I was unwell and was not coming to the site.
Comment from Diana L Crawford
This is a very interesting story about the myth of the Polaris star. The Hindu have so many beautiful myths about many things in nature. If I might suggest, look this over a bit as there are a few edits you could do. One place has the sentence begin with no space after the period and another with an extra space before a comma. Hope this will help. Good luck in your contest! xoxo
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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This is a very interesting story about the myth of the Polaris star. The Hindu have so many beautiful myths about many things in nature. If I might suggest, look this over a bit as there are a few edits you could do. One place has the sentence begin with no space after the period and another with an extra space before a comma. Hope this will help. Good luck in your contest! xoxo
Comment Written 08-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much for the suggestions and the detailed comments. I am sorry my reply was late .I was quite unwell.
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I'm sorry to hear that. I will keep a special prayer for you and never any worry on late response. you just worry about caring for yourself xoxoxo
