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Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Ever So Faithful"
A Book of Horror and Honor.

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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Grief, a portrait of which, versed in its entire dimension, within the parameter of theology, spectrum of imagination, how truth and happiness lies, within the measures of imagination, how you have passed the field of death of your son; well said, well done.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
    Thanks Al.
    Ricky
Comment from Alex Rosel
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I particularly like these snippets:

"That dropped Star in the West" -- Seen from the perspective of the Earth, stars do drop beneath the horizon. So, this is lovely imagery {smiles}.

"As Darkened Skies cry out a deluge of Angels tears" -- Again, the is lovely imagery. Thinking of those twinkles of light in the night's sky as "Angel's tears" (note: a possessive apostrophe is needed) is a neat description.

Thank you for this post {smiles}.


 Comment Written 08-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
    Thanks Alex.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This is a lovely sentiment and quite deep as imagination does hold the key to universal truths and all the appreciation of all God's beauty in creation. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
    Thanks Again Angel.
    Ricky