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A Book of Horror and Honor.
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Comment from
Alcreator Litt Dear
Grief, a portrait of which, versed in its entire dimension, within the parameter of theology, spectrum of imagination, how truth and happiness lies, within the measures of imagination, how you have passed the field of death of your son; well said, well done.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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Alex Rosel
I particularly like these snippets:
"That dropped Star in the West" -- Seen from the perspective of the Earth, stars do drop beneath the horizon. So, this is lovely imagery {smiles}.
"As Darkened Skies cry out a deluge of Angels tears" -- Again, the is lovely imagery. Thinking of those twinkles of light in the night's sky as "Angel's tears" (note: a possessive apostrophe is needed) is a neat description.
Thank you for this post {smiles}.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
Thanks Alex.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Mystic Angel 7777
This is a lovely sentiment and quite deep as imagination does hold the key to universal truths and all the appreciation of all God's beauty in creation. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
Thanks Again Angel.
Ricky
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