Family Ties Volume two.
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Comment from Henry King
What an excellent poem Rhonnie. I like the vision you send with the poem and your notes. The rhyme and placement of your words are excellent. Looking at that boy's face, I'm reminded of my own behavior during a downpour. I dared my mom, with laughter full of joy and looks wonder splashing in the puddles. And, it was better if the puddles were muddy. Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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What an excellent poem Rhonnie. I like the vision you send with the poem and your notes. The rhyme and placement of your words are excellent. Looking at that boy's face, I'm reminded of my own behavior during a downpour. I dared my mom, with laughter full of joy and looks wonder splashing in the puddles. And, it was better if the puddles were muddy. Well done.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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HELLO HENRY: I thank you for viewing and complementing on my poem. You have encouraged me here. You are appreciated. God bless you, Henry.
Cordially: rhonnie69.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Rhonnie,
Such a cute picture and poem. Funny how children like the joy of getting wet in a rainstorm.
IMHO ... your last line does not need all caps. You already included a question mark and exclamation point. I am not a fan for capitalizing all words in your short poem.
Mark
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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Rhonnie,
Such a cute picture and poem. Funny how children like the joy of getting wet in a rainstorm.
IMHO ... your last line does not need all caps. You already included a question mark and exclamation point. I am not a fan for capitalizing all words in your short poem.
Mark
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2019
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HELLO MARK: I thank you for viewing and complementing on my poem. You are appreciated. God bless you, Mark. Cordially: rhonnie69.
