Spring Lamb
Full of the joys of spring12 total reviews
Comment from victor 66
This must've been a really fun one-six-one syllable poem to write. I'm also very impressed with your illustration and how well they go together. I wish you luck in this contest.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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This must've been a really fun one-six-one syllable poem to write. I'm also very impressed with your illustration and how well they go together. I wish you luck in this contest.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Oh yes indeed - lambs are fun to watch in the fields around my place at this time of year here in NZ.
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I can imagine.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. He did a great job with the poem and I wanted to congratulate you for using the word that is not typically used. That shows imagination. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Hello mystery writer. He did a great job with the poem and I wanted to congratulate you for using the word that is not typically used. That shows imagination. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Thanks for your comments. I like to use interesting language.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this. It sure seems to be happy about something. I had no idea that they could jump so high. This poem has an excellent rhyme and flow to it. The artwork compliments your work well. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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I like this. It sure seems to be happy about something. I had no idea that they could jump so high. This poem has an excellent rhyme and flow to it. The artwork compliments your work well. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 09-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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The lambs are such fun to watch. Thanks for reviewing my poem!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This fits the 1-6-1 requirements perfectly. What a neat photo. I see some 'g' alliteration with 'gambol,' 'great,' 'glee.' Thank you for posting a happy poem!
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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This fits the 1-6-1 requirements perfectly. What a neat photo. I see some 'g' alliteration with 'gambol,' 'great,' 'glee.' Thank you for posting a happy poem!
Comment Written 08-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Thanks for your review. I wanted it to be a happy poem - we have bouncy little lambs in the fields here at the moment.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 1-6-1 poem about the lively lam that joyfully jumps as high as he can because he is alive, it is Spring time and he is happy to be around.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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A very well-written 1-6-1 poem about the lively lam that joyfully jumps as high as he can because he is alive, it is Spring time and he is happy to be around.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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I like that you enjoyed my poem. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Well doesn't this look familiar to me. This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct line and syllable count and consistent end rhyme throughout. The content is fun and playful. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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Well doesn't this look familiar to me. This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct line and syllable count and consistent end rhyme throughout. The content is fun and playful. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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Who can resist cute spring lambs. Thanks for your review.
Comment from Susan X Smith
The image you chose certainly complements the poem well. It is a fun, lighthearted piece with a great rhyme that well meets the writing prompt requirements. Good luck!
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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The image you chose certainly complements the poem well. It is a fun, lighthearted piece with a great rhyme that well meets the writing prompt requirements. Good luck!
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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Thanks for reviewing!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-It is a very spring like poem.
-There's even a spring
in the lamb's step!
-The syllable count and
rhyme are good.
-I like how you take on
the persona of the lamb.
-Good luck in the contest.
-It is funny when one part
of the world is in autumn
and another in spring.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-It is a very spring like poem.
-There's even a spring
in the lamb's step!
-The syllable count and
rhyme are good.
-I like how you take on
the persona of the lamb.
-Good luck in the contest.
-It is funny when one part
of the world is in autumn
and another in spring.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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Thanks for your comments. Spring is so obvious here I can't quite imagine Fall happening elsewhere.... we don't even call it Fall, it is just Autumn.
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You are welcome, and thanks for sharing. Actually, it is still summer here until Sept. 21.
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Theoretically, we are probably still in winter, but we had such a mild one the weather is warm enough to confuse the flowers and blossoms, and many of the lambs are out in the fields when they might usually be in lambing sheds.
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Thanks for sharing. The weather is certainly a mystery everywhere!
Comment from JudyE
I love this. I've seen many lambs frolicking in this way. It's not easy to photograph them just at this moment though. You haven't wasted one syllable here. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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I love this. I've seen many lambs frolicking in this way. It's not easy to photograph them just at this moment though. You haven't wasted one syllable here. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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There are many lambs in the surrounding paddocks now and they are a delight to watch. But they stop frolicking when I point my camera at them. Shy little critters.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I see indeed a beautiful lamb in a beautiful spring frame. I love your poem is so cute and full of life :"Free -
I gambol with great glee.
See?" Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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I see indeed a beautiful lamb in a beautiful spring frame. I love your poem is so cute and full of life :"Free -
I gambol with great glee.
See?" Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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Thanks for your review. I love the apparent delight of little lambs to run around feeling spring-like.
