Truth About Hell
We've all been through it.7 total reviews
Comment from fm wright
Maybe truth, but I would suggest you read the rules as it does not rhyme. If you rewrite it I will re review it. Also do not understand the artwork you have chosen and how it pertains to topic.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Maybe truth, but I would suggest you read the rules as it does not rhyme. If you rewrite it I will re review it. Also do not understand the artwork you have chosen and how it pertains to topic.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Thank you
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You're welcome.
Comment from shaffer40
I would have given it six stars but I've used them up. I think your brief poem is profound -- so true -- about truth. I often feel I won't survive it. How did you ever think this up? Brilliant.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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I would have given it six stars but I've used them up. I think your brief poem is profound -- so true -- about truth. I often feel I won't survive it. How did you ever think this up? Brilliant.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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thank you
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You're so welcome.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
While this is a good poem, it doesn't follow the required rules of each line rhyming. Perhaps you can revise before the deadline, Mystery Author. I will return to see.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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While this is a good poem, it doesn't follow the required rules of each line rhyming. Perhaps you can revise before the deadline, Mystery Author. I will return to see.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Thank you
Comment from Janetsue
Oh yes, very few people go through life without experiencing exactly what this poem presents. It is an excellent 1-6-1 contest entry. Unfortunately, some people never discover hope and, therefore, continue experiencing hellish situations without the emotional relief sorely needed. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Oh yes, very few people go through life without experiencing exactly what this poem presents. It is an excellent 1-6-1 contest entry. Unfortunately, some people never discover hope and, therefore, continue experiencing hellish situations without the emotional relief sorely needed. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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thank you
Comment from Iza Deleanu
This is a very powerful and strong statement in one line and I can relate. Truth that I survived the Hell. Thanks for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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This is a very powerful and strong statement in one line and I can relate. Truth that I survived the Hell. Thanks for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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thank you
Comment from DonandVicki
The title to your poem, the image that you chose to complement your work and the poem itself, really engaged my imagination and you only used eight syllables.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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The title to your poem, the image that you chose to complement your work and the poem itself, really engaged my imagination and you only used eight syllables.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Thank you
Comment from kahpot
Excellent as yes the truth can hurt though we all need to hear it as we cannot move on without it, this is a very well written short poem, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Excellent as yes the truth can hurt though we all need to hear it as we cannot move on without it, this is a very well written short poem, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Thank you
