Tuneful Transition
'Hear it' with all of your senses...21 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written even the odds poem about the tuneful transition from summer to autumn, it is a color display that varies from greens, pinks, and reds, to orange, yellows, and browns.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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A very well-written even the odds poem about the tuneful transition from summer to autumn, it is a color display that varies from greens, pinks, and reds, to orange, yellows, and browns.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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Thank you!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Those last three lines are magical and you created an ambient poem here, I also enjoyed the turn with 'cooling chorus' this poem is altogether delightful and charming and I had one sex left and it is all yours, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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Those last three lines are magical and you created an ambient poem here, I also enjoyed the turn with 'cooling chorus' this poem is altogether delightful and charming and I had one sex left and it is all yours, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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Thank you so very much, Dolly, for this beyond wonderful review -- you have put a real smile on my face for the weekend!! ;) THANK YOU for that!! ;) I hope you enjoy the rest of your weekend over there, ma'am -- take care out there!!
Comment from Gloria ....
Oh, I like this one. And particularly the opening and closing lines are: Listen, soul. Lovely imagery in your word choice and presentation that visually and verbally illustrates the changing colours.
Great job to you and best of luck in the voting booth.
Gloria
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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Oh, I like this one. And particularly the opening and closing lines are: Listen, soul. Lovely imagery in your word choice and presentation that visually and verbally illustrates the changing colours.
Great job to you and best of luck in the voting booth.
Gloria
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful review!!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I love the pictures you choose for this poem. I love the way you choose to transition from summer to fall, the personifications and metaphors are mesmerizing. I really liked this part: "fall whispers just beneath Summer's heat."
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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I love the pictures you choose for this poem. I love the way you choose to transition from summer to fall, the personifications and metaphors are mesmerizing. I really liked this part: "fall whispers just beneath Summer's heat."
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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Thanks for your awesome comments here!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a very lovely, skillfully-written piece. You have made excellent use
personification, metaphors, and alliteration to describe the approach of autumn.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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This is a very lovely, skillfully-written piece. You have made excellent use
personification, metaphors, and alliteration to describe the approach of autumn.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Thanks so much for this review....
Comment from Mia Twysted
Fall does start out more mellow and smooth. It brings a sense of peace to watch the change of the season, all the colors delight the eye.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Fall does start out more mellow and smooth. It brings a sense of peace to watch the change of the season, all the colors delight the eye.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Father Flaps
Really nice poem here, Mystery Poet. I enjoyed it.
These days, we find ourselves slipping into Fall. I think the first day of Autumn is September 21st, isn't it? Getting close.
I like so many things about your poem,
the fall colors
the personification of "Fall whispers"
the alliteration in "sings softly", "cooling chorus", and "sultry samba
to soothing soul"
the days are getting shorter
air is cooling down
and Norah Jones is playing the piano... (I like how you incorporate music with changing seasons. She fits!)
You've nailed this contest. How could you lose?
Cheers
Kimbob
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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Really nice poem here, Mystery Poet. I enjoyed it.
These days, we find ourselves slipping into Fall. I think the first day of Autumn is September 21st, isn't it? Getting close.
I like so many things about your poem,
the fall colors
the personification of "Fall whispers"
the alliteration in "sings softly", "cooling chorus", and "sultry samba
to soothing soul"
the days are getting shorter
air is cooling down
and Norah Jones is playing the piano... (I like how you incorporate music with changing seasons. She fits!)
You've nailed this contest. How could you lose?
Cheers
Kimbob
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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Thank you so very much, Kimbob, for this beyond wonderful review -- your comments have put a real smile on my face for the weekend!! ;) THANK YOU for that!! ;) I hope you enjoy the rest of your weekend -- take care out there, sir!!
Comment from Janetsue
This is such a beautiful posting...a wonderful combination of photograph and words. It is an uplift to read through the colorful lines. I sincerely wish you well in the contest!
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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This is such a beautiful posting...a wonderful combination of photograph and words. It is an uplift to read through the colorful lines. I sincerely wish you well in the contest!
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Thank you for such a wonderful review!!
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You're truly welcome!
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed this poem so much. It has beautiful writing. I like all the lines a lot. No mistakes found. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest! Nice job!
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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I have enjoyed this poem so much. It has beautiful writing. I like all the lines a lot. No mistakes found. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest! Nice job!
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much. :-)
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You're welcome.
Comment from kahpot
Absolutely beautiful, engaging the change of seasons with music and then ending with the music of soul relating to the change of our soul as we come down from winter and are soothed by the change very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Absolutely beautiful, engaging the change of seasons with music and then ending with the music of soul relating to the change of our soul as we come down from winter and are soothed by the change very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Thank you so very much for such a wonderful review!!
