Tuneful Transition
'Hear it' with all of your senses...21 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
Wow, this fits perfectly with how I feel about the recent weather here. I'm 'feeling' it 'with all my senses', and as well, enjoying this sublime poem's beauty. What a gorgeous presentation! Best of luck in the booth!
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Wow, this fits perfectly with how I feel about the recent weather here. I'm 'feeling' it 'with all my senses', and as well, enjoying this sublime poem's beauty. What a gorgeous presentation! Best of luck in the booth!
Comment Written 08-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Thanx for the review, Dawn -- so very good to hear from you, ma'am!! ;) :) Hope all's going well up there! ;) :) Take care of you and Miss Priss! ;)
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Thank you. I hope all is well with you, too.
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your use of the Even the Odds form to describe the shift from summer to autumn. Your picture selection and parallel color presentation, along with the use of alliteration are very effective. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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I admired your use of the Even the Odds form to describe the shift from summer to autumn. Your picture selection and parallel color presentation, along with the use of alliteration are very effective. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 08-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Wow, Joan!! ;) Those stars are beautiful and your comments are so very appreciated today!! ;) Thank you and may you have a wonderful 'Summer's End'!! ;) ;)
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Enjoy the rest of the summer as well and keep sharing these splendid post. Cheers- Joan
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
You certainly meet the challenge and yet in such an artistic manner as you weave a very flowing depiction of Summer's End. The picture compliments your very well chosen words.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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You certainly meet the challenge and yet in such an artistic manner as you weave a very flowing depiction of Summer's End. The picture compliments your very well chosen words.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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Oh, Raffaelina -- thank you, THANK YOU!! I am so very glad you enjoyed my view of summer's end...I do so enjoy the warm weather (I'm weird that way-lol!), but I am also thrilled that Fall is in the air!! Thank you for those lovely stars and have a wonderful week ahead!!
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Vivid, strong characterization of the seasons with "Summer's heat" and "Fall whispers". Descriptive portraits of the changes between the two times of year highlighted in this well crafted poem. "saltry samba" brings out the power of summer while "soothing soul" indicates the stifling hot days are soon to end. An enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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Vivid, strong characterization of the seasons with "Summer's heat" and "Fall whispers". Descriptive portraits of the changes between the two times of year highlighted in this well crafted poem. "saltry samba" brings out the power of summer while "soothing soul" indicates the stifling hot days are soon to end. An enjoyable read.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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Thank you so very much for this wonderful review!! :)
Comment from Susan X Smith
This poem was a good entry for the "even the odds" prompt. I especially liked the phrase "sultry samba." The colors in the image and in the script highlight the meaning.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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This poem was a good entry for the "even the odds" prompt. I especially liked the phrase "sultry samba." The colors in the image and in the script highlight the meaning.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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Thank you!!
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hmmmmm, Mystery Writer!
You had me all the way until the very end. Not certain how "listen" and "soul" are synonymous, but I am old...and I dance a lousy samba! :)
Best wishes!
Diane
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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Hmmmmm, Mystery Writer!
You had me all the way until the very end. Not certain how "listen" and "soul" are synonymous, but I am old...and I dance a lousy samba! :)
Best wishes!
Diane
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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LOL! Verrrrrry long story there.... :) :) Believe me, I get it... :) :) Will write more later.... Just checking in VERY briefly at this exact instant - we must be in tune with each other (haven't even had the computer on today.......)
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Comment from Diana L Crawford
This is a beautiful tribute to the ending of summer. Perfectly written structure and an excellent entry for your even the odds contest. I love how you used the various font colors to show the motion of change. Great job! xoxo
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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This is a beautiful tribute to the ending of summer. Perfectly written structure and an excellent entry for your even the odds contest. I love how you used the various font colors to show the motion of change. Great job! xoxo
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your review!!
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My pleasure to enjoy! xoxo
Comment from karenina
I always am taken my this Ombre' presentation of hues! It sets this poem apart from any of the others I have read for this contest... I'm not sure "listen" and "soul" are necessarily synonyms, however--and as I read the instructions it seems that is a requirement. (?)--- That aside, form forgotten, I could dwell in t his ode to Autumn for quite awhile--no season speaks to me like it!--Karenina
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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I always am taken my this Ombre' presentation of hues! It sets this poem apart from any of the others I have read for this contest... I'm not sure "listen" and "soul" are necessarily synonyms, however--and as I read the instructions it seems that is a requirement. (?)--- That aside, form forgotten, I could dwell in t his ode to Autumn for quite awhile--no season speaks to me like it!--Karenina
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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Thank you!!
Comment from Gail Denham
And thus summer comes slowly to its end - we've had a couple weeks of wonderful warm weather - finally - it will be soon that freezing happens where we live - leaves already turning.
Nice poem
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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And thus summer comes slowly to its end - we've had a couple weeks of wonderful warm weather - finally - it will be soon that freezing happens where we live - leaves already turning.
Nice poem
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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Thanks so much!!
Comment from David R. Davis
You've written a lovely image. We now live in AZ., so the end of Summer will be here in two more months. But I well recall the breezes and smells of Fall. The last two lines are all but perfect. Thank you for sharing your writing. Take care and go well.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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You've written a lovely image. We now live in AZ., so the end of Summer will be here in two more months. But I well recall the breezes and smells of Fall. The last two lines are all but perfect. Thank you for sharing your writing. Take care and go well.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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Thanks much for this awesome review!!
