Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

Oh my goodness, what is that artwork choice... The irony of picture and poem. You're too funny. Well thought out. Clearly written. Great visual imagery. Excellent work :)

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019

Thanks again, sunnilicious.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Oh my word, this looks like the awakening is not going to turn out well. Time to lead into the Halloween season I guess and your entry certainly meets that criteria. lol

Great job, Bill and best of luck to you with the Contest Committee. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019

Thanks, Gloria.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Must be a full moon somewhere as I seem to have read a few Horror poems lately, and this one accompanied with the artwork is excellent, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019

It?s September; time to get down for Halloween.

reply by kahpot on 06-Sep-2019

OK thanks for that I forgot

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Yikes! From the looks of the one sleeping? I would let that sleeping dog continue to lie. I would not want to be within a mile of that waking nightmare. Please believe me, I would not want to have to answer for waking that thing up.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019

The irony here, of course, is they didn?t make it.

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

Bill,

A very scary animated image accompanies your haunting one-liner contest entry.

Not sure that I want to wake up from this horrid dream.

Best wishes in the voting.

Mark

P.S. maybe the text would be better presented if the second line started with 'that ...' IMHO that sets off your survival idea.

Mark

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019

I wrote one line. Different devices break that line up.

reply by Mark D. R. on 06-Sep-2019

OK, I solely use an IPad and occasionally view on my smartphone. On larger format screens, it may appear as one line.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

eeeeewwwww! Somebody's got their 'horror' on this week, yeah? :) :) Without the pic, this could almost be a post-apocalyptic write.... buuuut I guess it still is, only it's a zombie apocalypse! ; ) ;) Thanx for sharing, Sir Bill, and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019

Thank you, Yvette. I was searching for where Dean got some of his cool gifs. I found this site and this gif.

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver a well penned One Line Poem. The content will strike a strong chord with the many horror fans here. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019

Thank you, MA.