pollywog transformation
1-6-1 in a Haiku-like format?3 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Bog is the appropriate place to grow pollywog, a larval frog or toad, to transform a frog; you have stated Nature and animal transformation connection; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Bog is the appropriate place to grow pollywog, a larval frog or toad, to transform a frog; you have stated Nature and animal transformation connection; well said, well done.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Thanks for your review. In searching about the transformation, I also had checked the spelling at Merriam Webster online. 'Polliwog' is a variant spelling, but I always knew it with the 'y.'
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
What's a 'polliwog?' I have no idea what that word means or the meaning of your poem and I hope you can enlighten me, I wish you luck with the contest though, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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What's a 'polliwog?' I have no idea what that word means or the meaning of your poem and I hope you can enlighten me, I wish you luck with the contest though, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Dolly,
Check out the life cycle of a frog on the Internet and you will discover the transformation of the pollywog. I know you have bogs in England ... LOL
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Okay, will do x
Comment from Susan X Smith
You did a great job on a writing prompt that I, myself, felt was too difficult to attempt. I also like the picture that you chose to go with it. Good luck in the contest voting.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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You did a great job on a writing prompt that I, myself, felt was too difficult to attempt. I also like the picture that you chose to go with it. Good luck in the contest voting.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Thanks Susan for your encouragement. FYI ... a traditional Japanese Haiku does not have to have the strict English 5-7-5 syllable structure.
