Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I'm loving the fun bouncy meter here and the magical content and sweet story. This is a charming write and ideal for the contest, children and adults alike would love this poem, a joy to read, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 06-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019

Bless you, Dolly. You always make me feel good. Wrote it about 1:00 last night. just re-read it and think it needs a bit of editing. But I do thank you for your very lovely words.

Comment from Susan X Smith

Excellent

This was a very cute poem which well meets the contest criteria. I especially liked the names you chose for your two main characters. I still want to know what their secrets were lol.

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 Comment Written 06-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019

I would, too, but they "ain't" tellin'. :)
wrote the silly thing very late last night. think some meter is off and probably needs a bit of editing, but MANY thanks!