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Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Diamond's In the Rough!"Poetry and Short Stories by George Medina Martinez
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Comment from CrystieCookie999
Nice job creating a different meaning to rocks and foundations in life. I guess it would be an extended metaphor throughout. I like the author notes, too. The first stanza made me smile to think of children mistaking quartz crystals for diamonds. Thanks for a good entry!
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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Nice job creating a different meaning to rocks and foundations in life. I guess it would be an extended metaphor throughout. I like the author notes, too. The first stanza made me smile to think of children mistaking quartz crystals for diamonds. Thanks for a good entry!
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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Bless you for the review and compliments.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Rocks hold a fascination for me and I saw the most beautiful collection of rocks and crystals in Funchal, Madeira, and I have collected a few on the beach, I enjoyed your rhymes here and wish you luck with the contest, your mystical write has a moral to the story too, as treasure is found in the oddest of places, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Rocks hold a fascination for me and I saw the most beautiful collection of rocks and crystals in Funchal, Madeira, and I have collected a few on the beach, I enjoyed your rhymes here and wish you luck with the contest, your mystical write has a moral to the story too, as treasure is found in the oddest of places, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Bless you for your time to read and review. Greatly Appreciated.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. In all of the things in the world, diamonds are one of the few things that flourishes under pressure. I like your comment about how we can effect children to help them become diamonds. Robert
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Hello mystery writer. In all of the things in the world, diamonds are one of the few things that flourishes under pressure. I like your comment about how we can effect children to help them become diamonds. Robert
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your time to read and review this poem offering.
Blessings.
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You're welcome!