Sight and Sound of Solace
Just breathe...and them mesmerize you14 total reviews
Comment from Gail Denham
How I love to watch the trees, leaves dance - and sing. They do sing you know - esp. the aspen when their leaves turn brittle and bright - they clatter such nice songs.
Nice poem
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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How I love to watch the trees, leaves dance - and sing. They do sing you know - esp. the aspen when their leaves turn brittle and bright - they clatter such nice songs.
Nice poem
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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Many thanks for these nice comments!!
Comment from Mark D. R.
A gentle verse accompanies your selected Googled illustration. You present a nice overall presentation to the FS community.
Do like your phrasing and alliterative second line. Fist line is most expressive too.
Good luck in the contest voting.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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A gentle verse accompanies your selected Googled illustration. You present a nice overall presentation to the FS community.
Do like your phrasing and alliterative second line. Fist line is most expressive too.
Good luck in the contest voting.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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Thank you so is the for your wonderful comments!!
Comment from Mia Twysted
Having never heard the word "dulcet" before the poem confused me. If you have no basis for meaning in a word it takes away from the meaning of the piece. However, I looked up the word and then reread.
To see the leaves dancing as they fall smoothly to the ground does soothe the soul even to think about it. I think because it signifies a new time is ahead, a change is coming and it stands to be more beautiful then it was before.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Having never heard the word "dulcet" before the poem confused me. If you have no basis for meaning in a word it takes away from the meaning of the piece. However, I looked up the word and then reread.
To see the leaves dancing as they fall smoothly to the ground does soothe the soul even to think about it. I think because it signifies a new time is ahead, a change is coming and it stands to be more beautiful then it was before.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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The definition is right there in the author notes. Thank you for your review.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. Your poem meets the 3-5-3 requirement for the contest and it is a peaceful verse with a calming picture. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Hello mystery writer. Your poem meets the 3-5-3 requirement for the contest and it is a peaceful verse with a calming picture. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your review!!
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you're welcome.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a nice verse.
The message is clear in so few words.
The beautiful artwork is a good match as well.
Good luck to with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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I think this is a nice verse.
The message is clear in so few words.
The beautiful artwork is a good match as well.
Good luck to with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this lovely poem
that describes an appealing nature scene--appealing especially for people like me who love autumn, when those rattling leaves are myriad colors.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this lovely poem
that describes an appealing nature scene--appealing especially for people like me who love autumn, when those rattling leaves are myriad colors.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Thank you so very much for your review!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Trees never fail to please me and a walk through the park will always lift my spirits and refresh my mind, and also soothe as you kindly remind us in your 3-5-3, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Trees never fail to please me and a walk through the park will always lift my spirits and refresh my mind, and also soothe as you kindly remind us in your 3-5-3, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much!!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 3-5-3 poem about nature and its natural transformation from season to season. We can only observe and enjoy each natural event taking place in front of our eyes.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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A very well-written 3-5-3 poem about nature and its natural transformation from season to season. We can only observe and enjoy each natural event taking place in front of our eyes.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Thank you!!
Comment from QC Poet
Watching leaves gently blow in the breeze is mesmerizing and soothing. Made me wonder if tired had 2 syllables it doesn't. Thank you for Sharing this 3-5-3 and your potic Gifts. Blessings
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Watching leaves gently blow in the breeze is mesmerizing and soothing. Made me wonder if tired had 2 syllables it doesn't. Thank you for Sharing this 3-5-3 and your potic Gifts. Blessings
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Thank you!!
Comment from Michele Harber
I've never thought of it that way before, but I suppose you're right that leaves falling gently to the ground do make a soothing dance. You describe the scene beautifully, using eloquent verbs and adjectives to paint your picture, and making excellent use of the scant 11 syllables.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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I've never thought of it that way before, but I suppose you're right that leaves falling gently to the ground do make a soothing dance. You describe the scene beautifully, using eloquent verbs and adjectives to paint your picture, and making excellent use of the scant 11 syllables.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much!!
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You're very welcome!
