Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a chilling write and Dorian has certainly done a lot of damage, lives are lost and homes destroyed, for two days this torment concentrated its rage on one town, such devastation in its wake and you summed it up in give words, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019

Thanks for such a considered review zanya

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

Well said. A storm can definately have deadly fangs.
The artwork is an excellent match.
Nicely done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019

Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya

Comment from Darlene Franklin

Excellent

Dorian the Hurricane sounds like his namesake in the Picture of Dorian Gray - ugly and dangerous. Deadly fangs, make me shiver. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019

Great review zanya

Comment from Raul1

Exceptional

Thankfully, hurricane Dorian isn't here to make chaos in Miami. But, I am concerned about the other states taking their toll. I hope those people turn out okay. I like your poem. Interesting. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019

Thanks again for that extra star ! zanya

reply by Raul1 on 08-Sep-2019

You're welcome.