Burning Trees
A 3-5-3 poem18 total reviews
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I guess that a fire such as this or any fire of any size that you're in would take your breath away. It does seem like everything that's in the path of it succumbs to its destructive will. I like this and the message conveyed in it. Great job and well done!
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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I guess that a fire such as this or any fire of any size that you're in would take your breath away. It does seem like everything that's in the path of it succumbs to its destructive will. I like this and the message conveyed in it. Great job and well done!
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Gail Denham
And I'm sure praying that we do not see that this year - as we did last year - everywhere - esp. in N. Califronia where a whole town burned up. Here in the Northwest we see many fires - some years worse than usual.
Earth succombed last year.
Nice poem
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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And I'm sure praying that we do not see that this year - as we did last year - everywhere - esp. in N. Califronia where a whole town burned up. Here in the Northwest we see many fires - some years worse than usual.
Earth succombed last year.
Nice poem
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from jenintorre
I really like this 3-5-3 poem and expect it will do well in the competition as it is the only entry that I have read that has real meaning. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
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I really like this 3-5-3 poem and expect it will do well in the competition as it is the only entry that I have read that has real meaning. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from misscookie
The artwork you choose goes perfectly with your poem
You captured my attention from the first line to the last. Some how I can relate to your word. It like I feel since my Great-grand son was kill Labor day during an argument The rage from the other person released fire from his mouth extinguishing the life from my beloved Great- grandson, I nicked name BB.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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The artwork you choose goes perfectly with your poem
You captured my attention from the first line to the last. Some how I can relate to your word. It like I feel since my Great-grand son was kill Labor day during an argument The rage from the other person released fire from his mouth extinguishing the life from my beloved Great- grandson, I nicked name BB.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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Thank you for this wonderful review and comments
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You're welcome.
Have a blessed and fun weekend.
Cookie
Comment from Mark D. R.
The forest burning image is a great contrast to your few words. The question is: Can humans solve the problem? Environment or the Amazon forest is a current example.
Good luck in the voting in this nature contest.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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The forest burning image is a great contrast to your few words. The question is: Can humans solve the problem? Environment or the Amazon forest is a current example.
Good luck in the voting in this nature contest.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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Thank you I actually wrote this as now we have fires that have caused deaths here in my country and very close to myself
Comment from Mia Twysted
Without the trees, we don't get as much breathable air. Burning trees makes me want to cringe. To see part of our lifeforce crumbling away.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Without the trees, we don't get as much breathable air. Burning trees makes me want to cringe. To see part of our lifeforce crumbling away.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much, and yes I agree
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. You included an astonishing picture with your poem. The poem does an excellent job of meeting the 3-5-3 requirements. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Hello mystery writer. You included an astonishing picture with your poem. The poem does an excellent job of meeting the 3-5-3 requirements. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much
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you're welcome.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think your short verse paints a very vivid picture.
Burning trees do extinguish life, it's true, but in some ways it revitalizes and renews.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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I think your short verse paints a very vivid picture.
Burning trees do extinguish life, it's true, but in some ways it revitalizes and renews.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this dramatically
descriptive poem--so relevant for areas where wildfires eat up forests, homes, and lives.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this dramatically
descriptive poem--so relevant for areas where wildfires eat up forests, homes, and lives.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Susanjohn
Yep, maybe for a bit, but life always finds a way. Strong words and thoughts to ponder in such a little poem! Very nice, I enjoyed reading. :-)))
Have a great weekend.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Yep, maybe for a bit, but life always finds a way. Strong words and thoughts to ponder in such a little poem! Very nice, I enjoyed reading. :-)))
Have a great weekend.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Thank you very much