Comment from JudyE

Excellent

Lovely artwork to go with cleverly chosen words. I like the background colour too. Good luck in the 3-5-3 competition. You've used the available syllables really well.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019

Thanks for the encouraging review. I look forward to the fall foliage this year in Vermont. Cheers.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count
is good, and the
imagery is effective.
-Good use of personification, too.
-The concluding line is
satori like, and relates well
to line two.
-A good entry; good luck!

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019

Thanks for the encouraging review. Starting to change in Vermont and I love it. Cheers,

reply by Pam (respa) on 05-Sep-2019

You are very welcome, and thanks for sharing. Enjoy the fall foliage!

Comment from Susan X Smith

Excellent

This is a delightful little poem which well meets the contest guidelines and offers a new slant on Autumn. I enjoyed reading it and I love the brilliant image you chose to go with it.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2019

Thanks for the encouraging review. The leaves are beginning to change here in Vermont. I love this season and going to the fair next week. Now if we could just fit in one week of Indian summer.......cheers