Whole Again
Sometimes forgiveness is not what is sought...or needed12 total reviews
Comment from Susan X Smith
I hope this poem is true to life, because the sentiment is lovely. It follows a senryu format. You chose a lovely picture to go with it. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.
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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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I hope this poem is true to life, because the sentiment is lovely. It follows a senryu format. You chose a lovely picture to go with it. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your review this evening -- much appreciated!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I have to give you a six rating. I think many of us can relate to the words in your poem. How hard we work and then our dreams are gone. That is when we start praying to the man above. Love your poem.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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I have to give you a six rating. I think many of us can relate to the words in your poem. How hard we work and then our dreams are gone. That is when we start praying to the man above. Love your poem.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Oh, Rosemary - what a wonderful surprise!! Thank you so very much for this lovely review and for those awesome, sunshiny stars!
